|Reviews for Evergreens|
| Kotaru chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
... That was amazing, :D Its fantastic! I love Alpin, and this fanfiction is just perfect w
| AKAAkira chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Well, as far as the title and the conclusion goes they were kinda irrelevant, but otherwise this is an extremely well-written fluff.
Honestly, your style's very polished here. Your character's thought process was presented very well. And it was a nice little tidbit to dump those two sisters from Tara's castle here - an good enforcement of the Royal Castle's brand, one might say.
So really, I have no suggestions for improvement aside from just practicing different ways of writing, or sustaining a story over a longer period.
Overall, yeah, it was pretty nice.