|Reviews for The World is Out to Screw Severus Snape|
| Halen.Emmett.McCarty4Eternaty chapter 4 . 6/24/2012
Very, very, very HOT! :D I love dominate Jasper, Submissive Edward! I think they're sexy :3
I like how this is turning out!
| KW2009 chapter 9 . 6/19/2012
Ok, since you like constructive critisism so much...
1. Shame this wasn't longer, more filled out and slightly more canon. I would have liked to see alice and bella's reactions for example.
2. Dialogue - everyone speaks the same. Most people do not say "I am", instead they say "I'm". All your characters, including emmett who I see as a big lug, spoke "properly".
3. I hate the word childe. How do you pronounce that anyway?
4. I loved your snape he was so sarcastic and funny. Shame we didn't see him and Harry meet.
5. Again shame it was longer because I love the idea for this story.
| cethmistmyk chapter 9 . 6/17/2012
I love it, I wish/hope you'd write more! :-)
I love the idea, and the little details and what nots! :-)
| bloodyhunter chapter 3 . 6/17/2012
You my friend are evil! Evil Evil Evil! I think that you made me as addicted to this fic as Edward is to Jaspers vemon. :)
| musme chapter 9 . 6/14/2012
I like it
| MissiYoung chapter 9 . 6/12/2012
This was awesome, thank you so much for sharing it!
| bridgette22 chapter 9 . 6/6/2012
This is a brilliant story. I wouldnt mind reading the full claiming
| Ivys Poison chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
The ending wit the wish made me tear up a bit
| Alohamora-Obliviate chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
This story is really well-written and entertaining. Nice job!
| lisa.demonic.angel chapter 9 . 5/10/2012
i want mre! Smex mre!
| Lw117149 chapter 9 . 4/18/2012
poor sev i love his reactions though
| Wicked Lovely 17 chapter 9 . 4/13/2012
| TheLexiaOfProcrastinationville chapter 9 . 4/1/2012
OMG wow this was just...wow! Great story!
| Silvermane1 chapter 9 . 4/1/2012
| nequam-tenshi chapter 9 . 3/30/2012
The details are wonderful!
Is there a sequal to this? I wonder how Harry's friends will take this?