Reviews for The World is Out to Screw Severus Snape
KW2009 chapter 9 . 6/19/2012
Ok, since you like constructive critisism so much...

1. Shame this wasn't longer, more filled out and slightly more canon. I would have liked to see alice and bella's reactions for example.

2. Dialogue - everyone speaks the same. Most people do not say "I am", instead they say "I'm". All your characters, including emmett who I see as a big lug, spoke "properly".

3. I hate the word childe. How do you pronounce that anyway?

4. I loved your snape he was so sarcastic and funny. Shame we didn't see him and Harry meet.

5. Again shame it was longer because I love the idea for this story.
cethmistmyk chapter 9 . 6/17/2012
I love it, I wish/hope you'd write more! :-)

I love the idea, and the little details and what nots! :-)
bloodyhunter chapter 3 . 6/17/2012
You my friend are evil! Evil Evil Evil! I think that you made me as addicted to this fic as Edward is to Jaspers vemon. :)
musme chapter 9 . 6/14/2012
I like it
MissiYoung chapter 9 . 6/12/2012
This was awesome, thank you so much for sharing it!
bridgette22 chapter 9 . 6/6/2012
This is a brilliant story. I wouldnt mind reading the full claiming
Ivys Poison chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
The ending wit the wish made me tear up a bit
Thornesedge chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
This story is really well-written and entertaining. Nice job!
lisa.demonic.angel chapter 9 . 5/10/2012
i want mre! Smex mre!
Lw117149 chapter 9 . 4/18/2012
poor sev i love his reactions though
Wicked Lovely 17 chapter 9 . 4/13/2012
Love it.
TheLexiaOfProcrastinationville chapter 9 . 4/1/2012
OMG wow this was just...wow! Great story!

~Ali
Silvermane1 chapter 9 . 4/1/2012
cool
nequam-tenshi chapter 9 . 3/30/2012
The details are wonderful!

Is there a sequal to this? I wonder how Harry's friends will take this?
alaison chapter 9 . 3/26/2012
Oh wow, this is nothing else if not original. I would really like to read more though. Are you planing to write more? If you are is there going to be a separate story, sequel, or are you going to add chapters to this one?
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