|Reviews for Super Smash Bros Clash: when realities collide|
| Emperor Serperior chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Not bad for a first story. Although there were a few grammar errors, it's overall fun to read, and your character is awesome.
Though some of the existing characters were OOC, they were decently written. Aside from that, good job, and I look forward to reading more. :)
| SuperSmasha2376 chapter 6 . 6/15/2013
Y did u stop its an actual good idea to put a human in smash and let her meet the brawlers come on its been a year y should u give up keep going PLEASE DONT STOP THIS STORY maybe u need action in the story and a little romance to couse drama and get peoples atention KEEP GOING
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/19/2013
Why'd you stop this is realyy good i love how crazy hand acts its funny
And i love the way you pit the fangirls rampaging on Pit but i would see y girls go gaga over him
And i think you should check your spelling at time cuz it realy confuses me
Oh and add some romance maybe with... Pit and Juliet lets see how that goes haha
Please continue its realy good PLEASE PLEASE :) :( if you dont im gonna kill myself waaaah
Haha bu realy please continue :)
| ZXCVBNMEM chapter 6 . 6/12/2012
Emi: Kupo, kupo, kupo, kupo, ku-HYRULE!
Ria: Is she alright?
Jerome: Uh...I don't think so...
| comicfan616 chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
Love Crazy Hand.
| ZXCVBNMEM chapter 5 . 3/31/2012
| ZXCVBNMEM chapter 4 . 2/12/2012
That is why Kirby is awesome. Cute and strong.
| Gejen chapter 3 . 1/28/2012
Awesome story great grammar especially for someone with english as their third language! keep up the good work.
| ZXCVBNMEM chapter 3 . 1/28/2012
Interesting story! I like stories when it involves the real world! Hope to read more soon!
| Can't Decide a Pen Name chapter 2 . 1/5/2012
Well, it was VERY long... I like that :D
Very interesting... The part with Snake interrogating her was pretty funny though! The characters were just a TAD OOC but that doesn't make much of a difference. It was still good :) Can't wait for more!
| Can't Decide a Pen Name chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Hm... This is pretty good for a first fic :D It's an interesting plot, and your character seems to be pretty... insane XD I will fallow this :)