|Reviews for Death and Justice|
| Rafflesiac1212 chapter 4 . 11/5/2013
Underage girlfriend? That Saber? Is Shirou an ephebo? (*v)
| Yikari chapter 4 . 6/4/2013
Wow. Nothing more to say.
Although, despite the wacky hijinks of a bunch of misfits spicing things up, Kiri-Kiritsugu team-up is just unbeatable in the awesomeness department. Maybe they could use the addition of 'dangerous amounts of the 80's', but otherwise it is just all-around badass.
| FleeingReality chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
Ah, a good fic about the adventures of Shiki and Shirou. There is almost nothing sweeter.
| Grey Muji chapter 4 . 8/13/2012
That was an interesting idea for a character! Like how you portrayed their dislike for each other. It's prey obvious to see why as Natsu even stated. All in all a pretty good story!
| ariel stormcloud chapter 4 . 5/28/2012
| chronos77 chapter 4 . 4/18/2012
Absolutely amazing. I loved how well written the fight scene was as well as how well you balanced out the characters in that battle. Can't wait to read more of your work!
| Blinded in a bolthole chapter 4 . 4/17/2012
Rochus' power kind of like "names have power over things" but done with a mystic sight. It was kind of like that Uchiha doujutsu Izanagi in effect at some times. Rather creative of you.
And Caren is a very odd person. What kind of nun thinks like that?... no need to answer that, after all like father, like daughter.
| EVA-Saiyajin chapter 3 . 4/13/2012
excellent story so far, wonderful details, great characterization. You've done a great job with your Dead Apostle Ancestor, and I really like the background you gave him. A very interesting set of abilities as well.
What I very much like is how you grouped THOSE five together. Talk about unbeatable. Keep up the excellent work!
| Rayne Sazaki chapter 3 . 2/11/2012
Needs moar backstories and updates!
Lots of fun reading this, all alternate-universe are indirectly CANON
| EVA-Saiyajin chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
excellent story so far, wonderful details, very well written. Keep up the good work!
| CoolStoryBro chapter 3 . 1/26/2012
Holy shit! The Amazing Adventures of Satsujinki and Shirou!
Two generations of GARness working together in a row and not even realizing it. Great story for when you are in the mood for awesome.
| wingybing chapter 2 . 1/11/2012
That was... impressive. Beautiful. It was my good fortune today that I decided on a whim to search for "Kiritsugu" here. The two top assassins of the Nasuverse cross paths... heh, just as spectacular as one might expect.
Anyway, more specific comments. I liked how Nanaya Kiri was portrayed - a skilled assassin who enjoys his job but who certainly is no murderer. Hmm, between him and Kiritsugu - ah, they have similar names - he looks like more of a monster, but he's less likely to do anything truly monstrous.
Also, Kiritsugu: "I'm going to go make sure they evacuate in an orderly fashion." Heh.
Now, excuse me while I go and check out some of your other fics while waiting warmly for the next chapter.
| Blinded in a bolthole chapter 2 . 1/3/2012
Great as ever, especially the assassination scenes were well planned and written. Great job!
| ArcherReborn2 chapter 2 . 1/2/2012
First off I have to say that your writing is amazing. Probably one of the best writers that I have had the honour of encountering here at Fanfic. You'd be up there with Gabriel Blessing and Deviate's Fish.
Originally I put off reviewing because I only review stories when I find a problem with it, or I find something I consider a mistake. With this story I made a exception because I found that 2 reviews doesn't do this story credit.
First off you have done a great job with character. The two major characters Emiya and Kiri were very precise. Rarely do I find this to be the case in Fanfic. Your detailed descriptions were also very good, leaving a professional feel in the story.
Overall great work, and good luck on Fate Far Side. Both these stories are amazing and I will be eagerly waiting for new chapters.
| Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
These guys both were classically considered Heroes, if not for their methods and morality. One is as much a monster as those he hunts, and the other is embodiment of "End justifies the mean".