|Reviews for Who's Your Sweetheart?|
| Psyduck chapter 1 . 6/25/2019
OMG! I 3 THE LAST PART! #Super funny! Anyway, SEQUAL! Psy-phy!
| Soulfire91 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
:] I saw the Tales reference.
| Aeris1172 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Allow me to be very picky for a moment.
Once upon a time, there was a Pokemon abridged series around and one of the first jokes in it was Ash and his mom arguing about the plural of Pokemon. "It's like the plural of moose! It's just moose!" So, the plural of Pokemon is just Pokemon. Not Pokemons. ;)
You have a few run on sentences, fragments and little inconsistencies. Nothing major. I do feel like it was missing a clear beginning, middle and end though. It was a little fluffy and short, but I didn't see any any problems to lead to a resolution. It ended rather quickly.
It's a cute fic, overall! And love that you threw Tekken in there, too. Keep working :)
| MarissaAmane chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Yes, tales of the abyss is really good. And so is this oneshot. C:
| xdxdxdxd chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
aww... So cute! Love this!
| CanINotLogIn chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Wew. I'm impressed. So beautifully composed! Really cute! :D
| pokeshippingfan25 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
This is a really good one-shot miss! So cute and unexpected! Very well written, indeed.