Reviews for Deceptive Appearances
sad reader chapter 34 . 6/16
Please don't tell me this is forgotten I love it
VampWolf Girl 4Ever chapter 34 . 5/16
love this story-was a bit resereved at how it would play out but i like it, please update again soon
keep up the fantastic work
mum2shane chapter 34 . 3/28
you going to finish?
Guest chapter 11 . 12/5/2014
I really don't like how Carslile can boss Edward around and treat him like he's a 12 year old... Edward is at least 230 years old and he can take care if him self and his actions are his to decide and his only... Other than that I like your story very much
Guest chapter 34 . 11/24/2014
misherukuro chapter 34 . 10/9/2014
Very entertaining thanks for the read
Rosawellian1984 chapter 34 . 6/29/2014
Oh I Feel SAd Once Again That Haven't Continue WithTHese Fic!. I Rally Love It I Hope U Can Find More Inspiration To Update THese Fic Once Again!
1WhoLoves2ReadAlot chapter 34 . 6/23/2014
Great story, so far! Hope you get a chance to write more.
pegasus5406 chapter 34 . 6/11/2014
Oh hell no...hehehe...I was so into this story for it to stop...please, please update soon...thanks hon, bigg huggs. Peggy
ClumsyReader chapter 34 . 5/28/2014
Please tell me you are going to finish the this story!
I want to know what happens next!
Please Update As Soon As Possible:)
Debbie Hicks chapter 34 . 5/24/2014
Chapter 35: then all the sudden all Vulcan arks with the best friends then a idea brewing in Bella Cullen's head and Prayed to make them Vampires it Worked The each both best friends with the Vulcans were with child went into Labor had seven year old children had Golden irisises then were Posioned by with us as well then with the Pack went Down striking us and them then Suddenly totalliest Molted out of our Own skins and as theirs and all the suddenly broken totalliest free of the Hardest but stoniest skins next then a breaking out ritual began then it was all over we were out cold totalliest out cold then reawakened in the Woods then had their blood exchanged and altered but the bodies were all of the remaining Pack were out Cold totalliest cold then with their own Women later had kids looked like Toddlers who met us then they too took each 4 Pack members had their blood exchanged with our own made us a whole lot different and stronger than normal then flashed open our now Cherry Red eyes oh my God Bella you prayed and your prayers made them as Born vampires could mate and reproduce hybrids with your own we are known as Kindred and they are known as Interplanetary Lycans as your maker and creator rise ye Children of Dracula together we are now a Army of the Crystal Millennium coven TOGETHER! We Attack his first wife send her ashes to the Volturi from now on the Treaty and the signing is now a Red Alert barrier it now one Land and treaty is now High Martial law from myself your Countess of Betazed we need all troops and Battle her ourselves so we did created a born newborn vampire and werewolf army then the Woman fled to Italy very way too fastest then barged in here Masters Some force of a prayer and it's a newborn ary of born vampires and werewolves Evolved as Kindred and Interplanetary Lycans what this your late husband and the coven you will be killed by ourselves then herself was Murdered with the Denalis's and Allies's bodies with the nomads's corpses suddenly released as very tribazillions or much many more all of the tribazillions or much many more and all of the Sudden they all of them ripped the Woman apart as a test and then more of them suddenly totallist killed her with us unification and then a sharpest ripping noise was heard they all of them threw back their hoods were us with our stolen skins and skins and looks had Milkiest Red eyes they were all Carnivorous vampires with more of the guards made Elder but senior guards and middle and lower guards were all young adults born vampires then we reawakened with adopted children only Eight of them wre allowed then Alice Cullen my daughter had a wildest premonition shared with Claudia Lynn Kishi was a priestess had long black hair wearing white red robes was Shinto was a psychic could sense evil in the air Heard her two black crows name Phobos and Deimos she was in fact Super Sailor Mars her other best friends were in fact Super Sailor Guardians were female with their knights were healthiest but fit as very strong horses who made us more stronger three times heard a Cat name Popcorn meowed to Shiloh Blackhawk suddenly sneezed had a allergy from had a Husky with puppies who were Adorable blew his nose Sorry Dr Cullen it's my cat allergies from his cat meet Victoria she has puppies appeared to be 3 weeks old it's Popcorn again far too busy with her naughtiest kitten it's normal to have pets in the house ugh BURP! Thanks for the food we are on a crash diet of very healthiest foods yes Excuse me please the homes with this merged into as a Palace with more of it with yours the Volturi they hired the Artemista who are infected but diseased but dead vampires hunt at night they are going to get us Chill Sis they murdered us and them and we are the Kindred the Pack are Interplanetary Lycans had a new stage of Evolution good god we are immortal being Irina is stolen Garrett others yikes this is worse gonna tear my hair apart acted human just in case of a Vampire crisis called the International vampires with Shifters to sped the night others are Carnivorous not me we switched diets on Animals she has been killed from us in the Volturi palace that Does it we are Skilled but trained ourselves the Vulcan martial arts and teach them to battle they are here then they all of had Golden eyes with their shifters and hybrids broken free The young Vulcan woman said I Greet you all this is a Crisis thanks Nahuel and your sisters we Joined your coven and our aunt father dead by them meet them We got a vampire problem it's both covens gathered their troops and took them away to be their witnesses where's the Shrimp gonna punch ulp the young Vulcan ensign swallowed but gulped was nervous he is from Russia He is very totally Muscular and he has a fiery temper don't cross his anger oh no he paled at a drop of a hat was white of his new blood was Venomous over here Ivan that's me we are Poisoned lost our bodies we have to follow a new rule and their law is from the planet Vulcan they look human but they are Extraterrestrials Black hair pointed ears Upswept eyebrows paler skins How are you KER-SLAP! OUCH! Watch it that is my skin you slapped put it here then First Contact was made between the Humans and Vulcans the Volturi heard this and they were furious and enraged of the First Contct of our two peoples became a very largest but low Coven/pack members and declared to then they have allies and they created a Coven known as the Crystal Millennium coven is a royal but ten thousands year old ancient Vampire coven reincarnated in the past gained as very much more members the Humans all of them are still slavesof the Artemista.

please please add a Crossover chapter of the three,
majorpixie chapter 34 . 5/20/2014
Oh my god dude you have to update you just have to. This story is just awesomeness.
natcityjp chapter 34 . 4/23/2014
I had alot of fun reading this so far. Can't wait for the rest of the story.
SpiderWriter1992 chapter 34 . 3/30/2014
Please write more? Please? Pretty please?
LadyRainDancer chapter 34 . 3/26/2014
I would love to read more of this! hope you update soon :)
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