|Reviews for Make or Break Me|
| GorGirl chapter 13 . 9/22
This sounds bad. I wonder what kind of shit Yorkie is into?
| GorGirl chapter 12 . 9/22
I wish her feet would take her somewhere better.
| GorGirl chapter 9 . 9/21
I hate the Peters of the world.
| GorGirl chapter 8 . 9/21
Bella was in shock and heartbroken.
| GorGirl chapter 6 . 9/21
I hope he tells Rose that Bella is in the hospital.
| GorGirl chapter 5 . 9/21
Looking forward to next chapter.
| GorGirl chapter 4 . 9/21
Mr Judgy is a better option than Peter.
| GorGirl chapter 3 . 9/21
I bet that Bella will make a wonderful painting.
| GorGirl chapter 1 . 9/21
I decided to read this while waiting for a new Condemned to us chapter. Looks really good!
| Kickinl8tr chapter 35 . 9/13
Wow I found this as a favorite story from another author. B. Krumova thank you so much it was a tough story to get through you did a great job helping everyone work through it.
| jk chapter 24 . 9/7
anyone else feeling like Edwards waiting for bella to fucking earn him? its total bullshit...
and that comment he made about Tanya being so confident that's why he dated her was bullshit he said earlier she was just a one night stand that was drug out
but I thought it was rude as fuck of him to say what he said but whats new really Edwards a freaking douche pile and bella can do better
and hey what was that crap...someone offered her 20 bucks to sleep with them and she did it? do you not know what hookers go for? LOL I'm not even kidding but my sister was a hooker for awhile she was supporting her heroine habit she made hundreds everytime she went out.20 dollars? that's some low class desparate shit right there...I could see 20 for a hand job but that's it...just saying it shows in the way you wrote her life on the streets. she would have toughend up after the dirst shit went down
its not realistic! not even close you obviously don't know shit about being homeless or desparate . and having her only going to one church to get clothes, and one shelter to eat...its seattle theres way more help out there then that. and the crap about her wearing the same clothes for a month isn't realistic either...just sayin
| jk chapter 22 . 9/7
honestly I don't see why bella likes Edward at all except he lets her stay at his house
hes kinda a douche and he barely has a personality
and whats with all the nasty looks he gives her? really Edward you fucked Tanya denali like you can anyone a whore...seriously tanyas just skanky and it was a one night stand that you drug out so you had somewhere to stick it...nasty
| Melcatt chapter 12 . 8/29
Bella is an idiot!
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/26
Seriously,"my options were truly limited"? How on Earth are Bella's options limited? She owns a house she can sell, has a skill from which she could make money and people willing to support her, a place to stay. This isn't about pride or independence but about sheer masochism or stupidity. I want to throttle this Bella; she's intensely irritating and self-destructive. I guess we're meant to think Edward's being horrible to her. I think he's being unbelievably tolerant!
| Jaygm chapter 35 . 4/7
Absolutely wonderful story! Bella had sunk so low, and it really was a gradual rise out of the ashes for her. But with the help of her friends and definitely Edward- she made it. You ended this on a perfect note! Thank you for sharing this,