Reviews for Make or Break Me
GorGirl chapter 3 . 9/21/2015
I bet that Bella will make a wonderful painting.
GorGirl chapter 1 . 9/21/2015
I decided to read this while waiting for a new Condemned to us chapter. Looks really good!
Kickinl8tr chapter 35 . 9/13/2015
Wow I found this as a favorite story from another author. B. Krumova thank you so much it was a tough story to get through you did a great job helping everyone work through it.
jk chapter 24 . 9/7/2015
anyone else feeling like Edwards waiting for bella to fucking earn him? its total bullshit...
and that comment he made about Tanya being so confident that's why he dated her was bullshit he said earlier she was just a one night stand that was drug out
but I thought it was rude as fuck of him to say what he said but whats new really Edwards a freaking douche pile and bella can do better

and hey what was that crap...someone offered her 20 bucks to sleep with them and she did it? do you not know what hookers go for? LOL I'm not even kidding but my sister was a hooker for awhile she was supporting her heroine habit she made hundreds everytime she went out.20 dollars? that's some low class desparate shit right there...I could see 20 for a hand job but that's it...just saying it shows in the way you wrote her life on the streets. she would have toughend up after the dirst shit went down
its not realistic! not even close you obviously don't know shit about being homeless or desparate . and having her only going to one church to get clothes, and one shelter to eat...its seattle theres way more help out there then that. and the crap about her wearing the same clothes for a month isn't realistic either...just sayin
jk chapter 22 . 9/7/2015
honestly I don't see why bella likes Edward at all except he lets her stay at his house
hes kinda a douche and he barely has a personality
and whats with all the nasty looks he gives her? really Edward you fucked Tanya denali like you can anyone a whore...seriously tanyas just skanky and it was a one night stand that you drug out so you had somewhere to stick it...nasty
Melcatt chapter 12 . 8/29/2015
Bella is an idiot!
Guest chapter 13 . 8/26/2015
Seriously,"my options were truly limited"? How on Earth are Bella's options limited? She owns a house she can sell, has a skill from which she could make money and people willing to support her, a place to stay. This isn't about pride or independence but about sheer masochism or stupidity. I want to throttle this Bella; she's intensely irritating and self-destructive. I guess we're meant to think Edward's being horrible to her. I think he's being unbelievably tolerant!
Jaygm chapter 35 . 4/7/2015
Absolutely wonderful story! Bella had sunk so low, and it really was a gradual rise out of the ashes for her. But with the help of her friends and definitely Edward- she made it. You ended this on a perfect note! Thank you for sharing this,
Jaygm chapter 34 . 4/7/2015
That chapter turned out mighty fine!
Jaygm chapter 33 . 4/7/2015
That didn't go too badly.
Jaygm chapter 32 . 4/7/2015
Wow! What is she going to do? I'd go to the cops.
Jaygm chapter 31 . 4/7/2015
She's in a bad spot, for sure. Even though he raped her, she did go there willingly and she was a prostitute. The justice system doesn't usually work very hard for justice when the victim is a so-called "undesirable."

Last chapter you mentioned that readers were giving you grief because it was taking so long for updates. That is why I wait until a story is completed. I am so thankful for all the writers out here in fanfic land that give us your creative stories for free. I know how RL can kick one in the ass. I can't imagine how you guys manage to live your lives as well as take the time to put your writing out here for FREE.

I am eternally grateful- it may take some stories awhile to complete- some may never get there. But when they do, I am so honored to be able to read them. So thank you- it is a shame that some simply do not appreciate the sacrifices that fic writers make to put their writing out here for us to read free.
Jaygm chapter 30 . 4/7/2015
That jackass Eric needs to go down. What a creep!
Jaygm chapter 29 . 4/7/2015
Bella seems to be getting her confidence back. Not caring what people think of you- especially those who don't know you- is a good thing.
Jaygm chapter 28 . 4/7/2015
OMG! What is that about?
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