|Reviews for Breathe|
| peeta's girl chapter 23 . 6/19/2016
Truly loved it! U have done an amazing job. The best part abt this fanfiction is that it still had some parts from the movie is a different way .The essence of the movie was still felt. KEith and NAtalie are one of the best couple's of all times.
| samcallaghan chapter 23 . 8/9/2015
beautiful story. can't believe it took me till now to find it. :)
| pensivetones chapter 23 . 7/10/2015
This story is so amazing! I'm so glad you were inspired by Keith enough to write this. Thank you and I look forward to more stories!
| dizzylittleelf chapter 23 . 5/6/2015
I don't know if you ever get this review, but I wanted to write it anyway. I NEEDED to write it.
I absolutely loved the movie, Keith, and was pretty depressed when, you know, the biggest injustice of all movie history happened, and Keith died.
So yeah, I watched the movie a few months ago, but I never really got over it. Then one day (2 days ago exactly) I found myself looking for Keith-fan fictions, and came across with this one. I spent two whole days obsessing over this story, and even when I was at school, I was pretty much freaking out 'cause I wanted to continue reading so bad! Now I'm close to crying 'cause I just finished the last chapter. :D
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing this story and I wish you all the luck in the world and hope you'll continue writing, 'cause you truly are amazing and inspiring. I also hope this little message made you at least a little bit happy - as happy as your story made me. Have a good day, and stay awesome! ;)
| Moonumb chapter 23 . 4/18/2014
I really REEEALLY loved this story! I mean it is soooo good! When I told my friend about it, she said that it is waaaaay better than the movie! Thanks sooo much for writing this story as it was very fun to read :)
| Moonumb chapter 13 . 4/17/2014
Jake is definitely worse than Raff
| Moonumb chapter 8 . 4/17/2014
Henna tattoo? Henna isn't a tattoo, it goes away after some time...
| Britt chapter 13 . 1/14/2014
Raff in the movie was actually a pretty decent guy. However, I like your take on him. Keith is incredible and perfect and amazing in the movie, and in any story or book, because he is Keith. Your story is so brilliant it could be published. The only criticism I have is that Natalie seems a little too fragile in this story, when she's supposed to be a very dynamic, head-on kind of person. Don't be offended though, your story is still phenomenal and you've done better than most people, including myself, could do. Of course, this was published years ago so my comments are probably moot anyway. :)
| AnimeRoxx chapter 23 . 12/14/2013
Amazing! It took forever for me to catch up, but I loved it. Best Keith story by far -
| enchantedquills chapter 23 . 11/20/2013
I loved it. I absolutely loved it :D Keith seems so sweet! I just watched this movie last night and I've read like 30 Keith fanfics since. Yours tops it, easily.
You're a really good writer
I Love how you uses some dialogues and basic storylines but added your own touch to it
| Olivia chapter 23 . 10/12/2013
Awesome. I just watched the movie. Different but good nevertheless.
| Quentasia chapter 23 . 9/1/2013
| CookieMonstersRUs chapter 23 . 8/17/2013
So amazing, loved it so much!
| mrebeccan chapter 23 . 8/16/2013
Oh come on! What is in that friggin' mystery pie? After 23 chapters, I wanna bake and taste!
Anyway, just came across your story and quickly ate it up. I really loved it!
There aren't too many Keith fic's out there and most of them aren't complete, so this really got my mood up :)
Also, I'm happy you did the bowling thing, I've been wanting to do it too since I saw the movie, Keith reminds me a lot about myself.
Keep up the amazing work, I really found this well written and very well balanced in the whole romance/angst/tragedy/hurt/comfort department and the character development was just right.
| iLoveRomance2o11 chapter 23 . 8/8/2013
This was a beautiful story. Keep writing!