Reviews for Melt
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2016
So, I've spent the last couple of days going through your collection of wonderful AHS work, because I'm supremely late in finding out about this incredible show and found myself craving exactly the kind of scenarios you have put on paper. To be honest, I could have reviewed each and every one of them but since it's pretty exhausting to comment on all these beautiful words with a lot more words that assure you each piece is equally epic, I am settling on my top five that I found here.

This one is particularly great in the canon you place it in and has the best mix of macabre and bloody with teenage angst and pettiness. I mean, outwitting Tate for that entire time span and then showing up to throw him down the stairs ... it's really the perfect little jab and speaks volumes about the boredom she's reached. And even though the entire thing sets out twenty years after Violet's death, I think it just goes to show that while they do change with age/death, they're still stuck in that headspace they were in when they met and fell in love.

About the sex - which you write so well in every fic I've seen - I really enjoyed the little act that they gave each other in the middle there. It's honestly bemusing to read them falling in and out of their argument, accusing each other and then reverting right back to insecurity, playing pretend when they both know it's just a performance. It makes it more than just smut, you never lose grip of the characters or their history together. The descriptions are just a total bonus, it's like the living room scene was one whole massive piece of foreplay for the reader as well, holy crap!

My favourite part of this has to be the end though, because Moira's response sums up the entire relationship. Great thing about the ghost house, I feel like they will all be painstakingly honest in their opinions of each other and about what's happening among everyone else. She's really got a point too - they can never let go of each other and no matter how much hate and resentment there is, both of them are too far gone to work without the other. Plus, it was a perfect cameo in this story (because who else would think to clean up the bathtub mess right away while others are having sex next door?)
KittyInBoyShorts chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
that was amazing but fucked up
readxme chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
I've been a silent reader up until now... because I just really wanted to say how much I love reading your Violate fanfics! You're like one of the best authors really! Your writing is AMAZING! I always look forward to your updates! :DDD
Miss Gypsy Willow chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
I swear you should have a crown or something because you're clearly the queen of writing violate. I mean holy fuck this just blows you away. I'm actually flailing around a little now. Just your writing continues to be the best I've read, the twisted-ness of all of this is just so perfect that it makes me want to cry. I loved how bitter they both seemed during this, you could just tell by (the really bloody amazing) dialogue shared between them and of course it was hot as hell. Urgh I'm gonna go sleep now because I feel emotionally drained.
jordan darling chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Before I even read this I knew it would be good. I always get a little too excited when I see your penname.
The Walking Reedus chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I've been a silent observer of your work for quite some time. I would be lying if I didn't say your creative ability with words, the description of events and the character development through out amaze me and inspired me to take a crack at writing.

I always look forward to the alert saying you have a new gut-wrenching, heart racing, juicy story to abide my obsession with this fandom.

::Applause:: Bravo
Pandora Imperatrix chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Loved this one, was hot, weird and very funny too.

Congrats!
stella chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
you are my favorite. this is amazing. everything you write is amazing.

Every ten minutes or so i become completely overwhelmed with one little sentence and i have to take a break from reading and emote.

never change. 3
lamiaec chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
This must be the best Tate/Violet fanfiction. It was sick and I loved every word. Thank you for this. And thank you got the recommendations.
ohyellowbird chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Um. I'm just gonna call Game Over. Everyone go home. Stop writing. The ultimate Violate fic has been written and posted and no one will ever be able to watch Piggy Piggy again without thinking about slit-throt Tate fucking fresh-dead Violet in the bath tub. GOOD GOD WOMAN! i don't even know what to type here. it was just all so fucking PERFECT. and sick. and twisted. and ridiculously fucked. but mostly just perfect. the entire bath tub scene was maybe the best thing i've ever read. and the water play and the dub-con towards the end... I. JUST. CAN'T. i'll be re-reading it later when my brain isn't just a useless pile of OMGTORTUREPORNOMG. but, sweet christttt. you are flawless, my dear. utterly flawless. hdsughs and the bit with the sheet and the oral. SO VIOLET. you write them both like you've been living inside their heads for years. lovelovelove. AND, on top of this absolutely decadent piece you rec'd my fics and are writing a companion piece to TDD. just, here. take my heart. it's yours.
Kristen Nicole chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
I think my favorite part of your writing is that you manage to stay so true to the characters while still allowing them adaptability - we see what Violet could be, what she would become. I love how you are able to make the macabre so impressively romantic. There should be something revolting about an eye gouging, but you made it palatable - and followed it with a love scene. That is masterful. I adore your writing. Thank you for sharing this with us. You are brilliant.
ScarlettWoman710 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Funnily enough, I was just thinking to myself yesterday that if Gray Glube was going to write me a billion (LITERALLY A BILLION) Violate fics that she better step on it - and then like magic, this absolutelyfuckingamazing fic appears. MY GOD, WOMAN. I guess I can scratch "write post finale Violate fic" off my to-do list because you have just written the ultimate, the best, the most fantastic post-finale fic that could ever be or will ever be. Now I have to figure out a way to write one that's not just a blatant rip-off of your brilliant ideas. Damn, back to the drawing board. The characters feel so freaking real, so completely in character, it's mind blowing. I LOVE LOVE Violet being bad, it was something that I adored in your other fics and seeing it here is absolutely great. Angry Tate is also amazing, watching them be bad together in different ways is so intriguing and so HOTTTTTT (yes, several t's are necessary to drive the point home). And because I'm a sucker for a happy ending, I can't stress how much her admission that she loves him and that he's letting her be so mean because he loves her - how much that means, even though you know they're just going to continue their fucked up torture of one another, although to tell you the truth I wouldn't want it any other way. SO. DAMN. GOOD. And the sex. Sweet Jesus. I think I could melt the snow if I went outside right now. I don't smoke but every time I finish one of your stories I feel like I need to start. So incredibly hot and... yeah. Just yeah. I'm out of words. And then to top it all off you recommended my stories and me as an author! I could die. I'm so flattered. Thank you! And now, on the topic of my Tate fic... get on it woman! *snaps fingers* Chop chop! Just kidding. You take your sweet time because anything you write, especially if it's in your fantastic Tate voice, is so worth waiting for. And one more time because I can't say it enough - this fic was unreal, so very, very good. Thank you so much for your story. If you'll excuse me, I'm now hot enough to go outside and melt the snow on my walkway - at least I won't have to shovel.
Ch0sen0ne chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
I half wish I hadn't read this first thing in the morning, because this is way too intense for pre-coffee reading. Other than that, I am just blown away. I love the way Violet decides to deal with being in the house. I also can totally see losing familial connection after so long.

I think a lot of writers tend to portray Violet as kind of weak, and she is anything but. You've done really well reminding readers of that. Great writing.
paceyourself chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Wow.

Your generosity with detail is mind blowing.

Now this would have made some pretty epic after hour television hahha.

I really enjoy fictions where Violet is the dominant character cause she's a strong girl and sometimes on the show they kind of made her look like a puppy following Tate around lol.

I'm reading the rest of your stories at the moment,your writing style is so original its so full of personality.

Delicious. :)

Thanks for the mention I blushed a lot when I saw it.
wildwriterrr chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
d'awwwwww. I don't know but this is completely perfect for them. The whole "If you love it so much then get on it." made me stop and laugh so hard xxxx
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