|Reviews for When Peacocks Fall|
| Lucyole chapter 6 . 12/24/2016
very sweet and good story I like it very much.
| TashaRose chapter 6 . 5/2/2014
| TashaRose chapter 4 . 5/2/2014
Another fine chapter.
| TashaRose chapter 3 . 5/2/2014
Excellent next couple chapters.
| TashaRose chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Excellent start to this one. I do love a good Lumione story.
| Euni-chan chapter 6 . 4/12/2013
OMG! It was amazing! I really liked this Fic...
| onecelestialbeing chapter 3 . 5/25/2012
LOVE love love it
| onecelestialbeing chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
OMG THIS STORY IS SO WONDERFUL!
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/5/2012
| DZAuthor AKA DZMom chapter 6 . 3/2/2012
This was a nice story with a sweet ending.
| Missa chapter 2 . 1/22/2012
Oh dear, more mistakes in this chapter on peafowl.
Since she is a peahen she would be brown with a short tail. Also I'm uncertain why she would be walking about when she can fly. Males are sometimes weighed down by their tails if they get too heavy but females aren't.
| Missa chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
A peacock is a boy a PEAHEN is a girl. :3
| sweet-tang-honney chapter 6 . 1/18/2012
loved the story thank you.
| CeliaEquus chapter 6 . 1/18/2012
Gah! It's all over? Seriously?
At least it ended happily, I'll give you that. :D
| honksfan4life chapter 6 . 1/18/2012
Very nice story.