Reviews for Holy Roller Novocaine
afonz chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Oh God, I just...I don't know what to say. I'm snot sobbing all over the place.

As much as this was heart wrenching to read, it was so beautifully written. I loved how you incorporated A Psalm of David into the last sections of this instead of stating it in the beginning like you did with the other sections. They effect was so much greater.

My favorite line was "Red empty shells from the blasts before empty the gun, hitting the ground, and float in blood until they collide with my knee" much visual imagery going on in that one small sentence.

I did not read many of the entries for the contest because sometimes the angst just kills me, but I'm really glad I read this. It really was beautifully written.
Twilightlvr1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Wow, did this make me cry. This was incredibly powerful and amazingly well written. I very much enjoy your writing. You are wonderfully gifted at writing peoples emotions.
SunshineGal3 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
I...really don't even know what to say. That was simply amazing. Gut-wrenching and utterly heart-breaking, but amazing.
zkcej chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
And that's what you called LOVE for real!

Such a morbid ending yet full of lesson ...

I was nervous the whole time reading this that edward may die and left bella alone thank god it was not like that cuz I can't take that...

Thanks for this

dommie06 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
oh wow i dont even kno what to say...i liked it...
superantona chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
i had a classmate in all my years in school that went through hell every single day i always wander how he stayed saine...children are cruel...
EdwardsMaude chapter 1 . 12/30/2011's all i can think of right now. wow. you are amazing.
Beans827 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Oh man that was a roller coaster of emotions. I hate that they teased Collin so much but yeah, what he did is so wrong. But wow, that was powerful. Thanks for sharing it.
robhasmyheart chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
I read this story earlier when you posted it. And all I have to say is your stories real dig deep. They leave me saying wow...

This one deals with all sort of high school kids deal with everyday. The worst being bullied. You never know when someone is going through something, you just don't know when and if they are going to snap.

Yet another great story.
IsleEsme1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
that was so heartbreaking. i had a feeling it was going to happen but it still hurt to read. wow. that was amazing.
tarajo23 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Holy hell. I knew what was going to happen as soon as Collin was introduced...but I am still speechless. School scares me. I have an 11 year old who will be going into middle school next year and it absolutely terrifies me. Things are so different today. Kids have so much pressure. Thanks for the read. Love your words always!
Leelan Oleander chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Wow. I'm all kinds of speechless.

Just wow.


milkfetus10 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Wow! What a powerful story!
MalloryKnoxx chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Makes me wonder how long people like Denali have to die inside before they get to a point where they feel that physical death is the only way out.
October25 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
it's a shame you didn't win because this is quite good. you should try reading Nineteen Minutes by Jodi Picoult because it reminds me of this, unless you already have.
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