Reviews for The Force Unleashed
Ofunu chapter 4 . 10/26/2012
Meh...the story could be impressive if you had a beta to fix all the grammar mistakes. As it is now, it's barely passable.
Peter Kim chapter 4 . 10/26/2012
I look forward in Vader killing Sasuke when sasuke trys to atttack Vader.
War Sage chapter 4 . 10/26/2012
good chapter
RoyalTwinFangs chapter 4 . 10/26/2012
Not bad.
Warmaster Tzeentch chapter 4 . 10/25/2012
Ah Sasuke, blind as a bat about how to fight, he can't match Vader, for he knows how to use the force!
MyinnerDEMON17 chapter 4 . 10/25/2012
Great chapter
120991ln chapter 3 . 10/19/2012
cotinue absolutely loving this story
Guest chapter 3 . 10/16/2012
You do not have a clear understanding about the english grammar. Why you will probably ask. Because some of your paragraphs are so freaking huge and ONE freaking sentence. Not only that but you are forgetting words -dare I say regularly- in your sentences. This is a really good idea though and I'll still give it a chance but you really should recheck it and pay close attention to your absolutely HUGE paragraphs.

MyinnerDEMON17 chapter 2 . 9/28/2012
great story
Guest chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
This is pretty good but i liked the other version better.
dracomancer6491 chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
There are several spelling mistakes throughout the chapter, other than that it is a good chapter.
ddcj1990 chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
Sweet chapter I like it Im glad that Naruto revealed himself to Fu also I still think Naruto should be paired with Fu, Temari, Samui and Karui
ddcj1990 chapter 2 . 9/25/2012
Very good I hope that you have Naruto paired with Fu, Temari, Samui and Karui
ddcj1990 chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Great first chapter
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