|Reviews for For Who Would Mourn a Snake|
| RosalieCullen93 chapter 6 . 1/3
This made me cry it was so beautiful.
| xX-Blue. Nymph-Xx chapter 6 . 5/27/2013
Very interesting! I'm curious what heppens next!
| Madlenita chapter 7 . 1/20/2013
Amazing story,thank you for that, i culdn't stop reading...
| Three Dead Hearts chapter 7 . 6/4/2012
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| Three Dead Hearts chapter 4 . 6/4/2012
Such an interesting idea.
| Three Dead Hearts chapter 3 . 6/4/2012
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| Three Dead Hearts chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Interesting story you have here.
| OnlyTimeWillTell chapter 7 . 5/7/2012
this was lovely. i don't know why it doesn't have more reviews. while i don't agree with everything that happened to severus in the limbo (everyone has their own ideas about that sort of thing), i thought you made some very good points about severus's character/personality and his relationship with others.
one thing that bothered me was the resolutions to the trials he went through. it was made clear each chapter what the point of him meeting with each person was, but i don't feel it clearly showed him resolving those problems. it's like 'severus feels badly about this... now he doesn't'. but, why? usually there's a point at which a person has a revelation, realizes where they were wrong, and that causes them to change their mind. and, i mean, that sort of happened, but it was never quite direct and focused enough to show his transformations.. rather, you just had to assume that it happened for him to end up moving on.
well, maybe you did do that, and i just didn't see it clearly enough. again, it depends on each reader what constitutes a dynamic change in a person. that's just how i feel.
also, your grammar is a bit off. i think it was all the commas.
| SpencerReid chapter 6 . 5/6/2012
'Not out of your love, for me." actually yes, it was. Be thankful lily, that he even wasted so much time protecting a boy he didn't have to.
'you had a choice' some choice lily. Choose the 'light side' which abuses, treats like shit, almost kills, and treats lower then a dog, or the 'dark side' who treats him like a human, an equal, and not like a dog.
Harry had friends, he had Dumbledore to hand things to him and make his life so much easier. Severus had one friend...who then married a bully and teased him about his poverty. a 'friend' who struggled not to laugh when he was being stripped upside down, Some friend. Her life was rainbows and kittens and his hell, she has no right to compare her and her son's life to his. Because it's not the same, not even close.
| SpencerReid chapter 5 . 5/6/2012
So what is Lupin trying to prove by scaring the shit out of someone who already almost got killed by him twice? that he is a monster? or that no matter what Severus does he's always worse then the bullys who hurt, harassed, almost killed, and made his life a living hell time and time again.
And why does Lupin have to convince Severus: my childhood was sad so I took it out on you by becoming a prefect and joining a group of bullys, therefore not do my job and let them hurt you. Wow, I hate Lupin now, he's no longer a fave character of mine.
This is such a mean fic towards Severus. All this enlightning is doing is just showing him that nothing has changed and the verbal abuse and teasing and the self riheous marauders will last for eternity.
| SpencerReid chapter 3 . 5/6/2012
Wow look how self richeous Sirius is being. He's a prick in Heaven and a prick in Cannon, no difference to me.
Sirius always get's pleasure from Snape's pain and he always thinks it's hilarious. This story is renewing my hate in the Marauders because your writing of them is too close to cannon.
| SpencerReid chapter 2 . 5/6/2012
"I too must admit, that I am impressed with your, talents."
what talents? his leadership, teaching one thing (DADA), and DADA?
that's all he's good at. His killing of the dark lord in book 7 was because of his insanity, and the horcrux's being destroyed. If it wasn't for Nevil killing Nagini and everyone around potter and his luck in every book he would have died several times over. Plus Potter had the elder wand, he had all the upperhands and it was no way a fair or equal fight. But that's how it usually goes, seeing as it's the only way potter can only win anything.