Reviews for Hunter
Boo chapter 5 . 1/16/2012
What the fuck's got up Holly's ass? Bella was well within her right to do more to those mutts than she did yet Holly hits her? WTF? She had better have a damn good reason tho I doubt it. Bella's too nice, she should teach Holly a lesson but again doubtful of her doing anything like that. Grr. Alice should come kick her ass if Bella wont!

bitten2 chapter 5 . 1/15/2012
Amazing story! Please update soon i cant wait to see what happens!
WolfDragonGod chapter 5 . 1/15/2012
great update
Random Peep chapter 5 . 1/15/2012
Ohh ouch. Cat fight indeed lol. Anyways awesome job, can't wait to see what happens! P
Biolet chapter 5 . 1/15/2012
Interesting chapter as always. Loved the bellice time and Bellas speech to wolves was quite(no idea how to spell that) impressive. Can't wait to see whats going to happen next. Keep up the good work.
dhisasian chapter 5 . 1/15/2012
update soon. can't wait to find out what happens with bella and holly
BlackSeaSerpent chapter 5 . 1/15/2012
whoa,beast mode the alpha on his knees.

daayumm holly, what the hell uh oh
lynettecullen chapter 5 . 1/15/2012

Bella better get her lick back.
Nissa-Cullen chapter 4 . 1/10/2012
This is neat. I'm interested to see what happens. I'm not a huge fan of the wolves so hopefully they'll straighten out soon. I always did like Seth though. He was the only one who gave the Cullen's a chance. Maybe he'll rub off on the others. Will we have to worry about Bella's tribe trying to come after them?
WolfDragonGod chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
Great update I can't wait to read more
Random Peep chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
Lol loved it! Awesome job, hee hee it's just too cute how Alice and Bella don't want to be away from each other and can feel the physical pull when they are. Anyways can't wait to see what happens! P
BlackSeaSerpent chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
Well yes i liked chapter was the families together(well partially)keep em comin
aurike chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
Aww that was a nice chapter and i really like this story and the idea of it :) Hope Bella and Alice could be happy together :)

Poor Bella and Alice, had to separate awww i would like to see Holly separated from Seth, because from what i read it seems they never were separated for more than couple of hours :)

i loved the idea of the dragons being magical and very intelligent creatures :) i always thought about them as such :)

i'm glad that Alice and Bella, can already hear each others thoughts, somehow i don't think it has anything to do with Alice being a vampire, i think it just shows that their bond is very strong and right. When i was reading previous chapter, i thought that it would be cool if Hunters' mates would also get some magic from their hunter mate, that they could protect themselves and maybe even help to protect the said hunter. But you didn't write about this quality of their powers, of their mating bond, just that they can feel each others emotions and hear thoughts. :) Maybe Bella being so special could do that lol maybe her bond with Alice could be even more special and Alice could get some magic from least enough to protect herself from fire, because i if i understood correctly many hunters can yield it. that is dangerous for the vampires ;DD

either way, great story, can't wait to read more of it :)
BlackSeaSerpent chapter 3 . 1/6/2012
damnit...i want some of that food!esme rocks!
lynettecullen chapter 3 . 1/6/2012
I'm glad that Rosalie is the only trouble.
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