|Reviews for Power Girl's Rebirth|
| JamesTKent chapter 1 . 7/22
I think you need to work a bit on the mechanics of dialogue vs. exposition, and how to trim your paragraphs better to it reads more easily. But, it was a FUN story, and the notion of a young man turning into Power Girl was definitely . . . different. Well, and having Cleo show up from the Marvel universe was pretty odd, too.
| NANKSTA99 chapter 1 . 3/7
Needs more sex scenes
| josh parsons chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
thats a funny am amzoning stroy
i loved it
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
lol you know power girls 6 foot right so is super girl and galatea
| Hishin Trueflame chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
While I was interessed in your story the grammar mistakes just ruined it for me.
My advice would be to rewrite it and fix the mistakes.
| Khiori chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Pretty damn clever! NO ONE would EVER figure out that secret identity, lol! Really good idea and you carried it out just right, this was a blast to read. Good work!
| GWHH chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
| Discordant feelings chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Fun, and much better than what DC is doing with Karen... that awful, awful, awful! New custome they gave her is terrible.
Glad to see someone has some love for PG.
| Datonman chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
Entertaining story. It was top-notch. You must do a sequel in which Jacob encounters a similar person just like him who idolizes his favorite villain. Just an idea. Great story though!