Reviews for His Overcharged Soul
draco-non-dormit chapter 1 . 9/7/2017
I like the Shakespeare
anonymousautonomousavatar chapter 1 . 8/17/2017
"A tiny guttural sound welled up in his throat."

This is such an excellent description

"It was what he had always imagined parents were supposed to do...He didn't want to believe it. Remus had a good mother. He deserved a good mother."

Poor Sirius, my poor boy! '[

I'm reading through the MM for the first time looking for inspiration and what's already been covered, and they are really great. It's fun to see the story from another viewpoint.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2017
Your writing is lovely - thanks for this one shot! :)
The Other World chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
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mokubahv chapter 1 . 4/30/2015
Ooh, I love it! I like how analytical and determined to solve a mystery Sirius is. Haha. Freat Missing Moment.
Purpleread chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Oh, great chapter. I really like how you wrote this from the three boys' perspectives. And I love your Sirius.
Rogue chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
You have a wonderful way with words, you know? It sounds really poetic and the meaning come straight across. It awesome
TheEighthBit chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
He's figured it out! Oh I love your writing, it's just amazing! These Missing Moments really help to figure out what was going through Sirius' head, just as the full story shows Remus'. I love the insight you have in these, I'd never be able to think of these sorts of things myself. Stunning!
Crazy Female LEPrecon chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Ha ha, I love it. Please update soon, maybe on the last day of August, it is a blue moon you know.

Crazy Female LEPrecon
DerangedxandxSarcastic chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Good on you Sirius. I love that none of the things going through his head was disgust. You did a wonderful job of having him figure it out. Great job!
sickforsomething chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
haha i love this one too! but u shud add another chapter from sirius' perspective about confronting remus. this part is my favorite part of Against the Moon so far . .. :)
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Yay~! Love it~ .
aloyalalbeitsilentreader chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
I loved it! I am deeply in love with your Sirius :-D
Professional Procrastination chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Wow. So good.

I love the missing moments, they quench my thirst for that extra little something. If I thought the first one was good (hehe.. so funny.. yet so sad..), this one is amazing. I love the characterization of Sirius Black, so honest and innocent and caring, even with his anger, complicated background and desire to hex others to feel in control. I love hearing the story through his voice. Much as I love Remus, the contrast between their two views gives the work such depth and reality. These aren't just mindless troublemakers, they're people.

But I digress. Stoplight Delight's accomplished writing style and careful attention to detail (i.e. the crater on the moon? So perfect!) make for an enjoyable and heart wrenching read. This chapter struck home with me because we get to see Sirius's thought process, we get to watch him put the pieces together. To me it's an echo of my own experience reading The Prisoner of Azkaban - and I don't think I'm alone in this - as I tried to figure out "what's with this guy Lupin?"

Incredibly powerful, Stoplight Delight.

Kudos to you
Firebirdd chapter 1 . 1/9/2012

You write from Sirius' POV so well that I really felt myself being swept up in the mystery of it all with him - the assumptions of [relatively] petty adversaries such as third-year Slytherins or teachers obscuring the darker hints that all was not quite right with Remus.

Masterful work!
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