|Reviews for One Piece at a Time|
| Katlover98 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Go Sammy, kick that mother effer's ass!
| ronelle chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
poor Sam. i hate bullying. I've been bulled before.
| vanaynay67 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
U made me cry! I wanted to rip that fuckings guys head of then feed it to the camels! Am was all innocent and adorable! Damn if i were one of those waitresses i would've pulled out the rifle :-\ I'm serious...I'm totally pissed right now. Sam beating the shit out of him made it a little better and ur speach at the end did too...but I'm still furious o_O I'm gonna go jog. Thxs
| mememeems chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
i love these timestamps!
i've re-read retribution several times and just now found the timestamps.
i really enjoy read about how sam is doing since his encounter.
thank you so much!
| Killingdanse chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
This is a great series it is really well written. It is a shame that you haven't written more of it. Please if the urge strikes continue the story.
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
It is always nice to see a bully get his just reward. Even not quite healed, Sam Winchester has been taught a whole lot of self defense techniques.
| monkeymuse chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
As someone who was teased for years!I second you in kicking the bullies in the joy department. One would be shocked how they leave you alone after that. Go Sammy
| lizzieten chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Wonderful as usual! Loved it! Being that I was bullied in school I hate it just as much as you do. Beware anyone who tries to bully someone around me.
| jrztroubadour chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
This was an awesome story, I hope you make more of this, I want to know how Sam recovers and what is the price John has to pay. I have read some of your stories and I really like the personality you've given John, the boys too of course. I totally agree with your message at the end. I loved this.
| sylvaniae chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Completely love this story! Wish it were longer, but it was still AWESOME. Sorry I've been such a lurker. I've read nearly all your stories, but I haven't actually reviewed. Feel terrible. And I completely agree with your statement about bullies because I was very bullied, and it still haunts me now, just in a different way.
| darksupernatural chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
I Did read Retribution and as always I loved every second. This too. I love that there is still some part of Sam, maybe buried deeply in this case, but still there, that comes out to defend and protect. If it's Dean needing it or Sam himself, it's there and it's fierce. The best kind of self preservation. Love it. Thank you!
| Soul Music chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Fuck right, punch their heads in! Damn straight. Okay, I'm good.
This was beautiful. I've just found this story arc and it's a sensitive subject presented brilliantly. Sure, people get offended, but fuck them, this is great. So many people skirt around it and paddy foot over it, that doesn't make for anything useful to anyone. You need the substance in the story. And I love this side of Dean.
Yes, there's Sammy and the way you write him is amazing. It's not like he's a child, which is what a lot of people would go for, because there's still that underlying intelligence that we all know he has. There's more of a depth to the character still. He's still Sam under the damage and each story there's more of that coming through.
This one especially. Because Sam was taught to fight, it's a primal instinct for him now, ingraned in his body not just his mind. And maybe I'm over thinking it, but that's how it comes across.
And Dean, I love this Dean. Still the hardass, look-at-Sammy-the-wrong-way-and-I'll-screw-your-face-into-the-table, but he has this tender edge that's allowed to come out in public and not just when Sam's lying on a sick bed. And that's good for him, it makes him more thoughtful and perfect for Sam. He's encouraging and supportive and amazingly Dean even though so much has happened.
And I'm rambling, but I love this! Okay, I'm done!
Love Eryn xD XXX
| doyleshuny chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Shame on me cause this is the first I noticed that you did a follow up to "Retrobution" which was one of my favorite fanfics of all time BTW. Anyway I've been so busy lately I haven't had a lot of time to read.
Anyway YAY for our Sammy! He totally kicked that asswipes ass. I bet it will be a while before he think's about bullying huh? I mean some skinny little thing tore him a new one. I love the way Dean did the "Samuel Winchester" thing too. That was adorable to me for some reason. I loved the whole thing. Thank you sooooooo much for the awesome follow up!
| Skye1963 chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Thanks for the story! You're right, we do need to stand up to bullies. It does follow you into adulthood and influences your life. The anger at being victimized can be substantial and will come out. No ifs, ands, or buts. Sam clearly showed his anger and fear at being hurt again and was able to fight back this time. I could see how Dean would have to yell to get his brother's attention. Sometimes you have to shock a person out of his/her rage and Dean was able to do that for Sam. Thank you for this story and it's companion pieces. You have done a wonderful job with a very hurtful subject.
| Wallflowergirl chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
I was so glad for Dean that he overheard something positive from the waitresses (and I loved how they cheered Sam on!).
I hope Dean dealt out a bit more Winchester justice to the guy. I'm SO with you on the zero tolerance for bullying!