|Reviews for Breakdown|
| emmzac chapter 6 . 12h ago
Ok now that Edwards home lets see what he can do for Bella. I managed this chapter before I need to head of to work so I'll be back in about 10 hours or so. It's been great reading by the way
| emmzac chapter 5 . 21h ago
So Good! Sorry for this oh so short review but I need to continue and hit next. Thanks for sharing though
| emmzac chapter 4 . 22h ago
how will Edward react and has Bella improved any in the past three weeks or will it be Edward that heals her heart, mind, body and soul? Reading on even though it's getting late and I have to be up early for work
| emmzac chapter 2 . 3/16
Still here and reading but not wanting to stop so until the next review but first I feel for these three and I just hope Bella comes through this as strong as Alice & Rose have
| emmzac chapter 1 . 3/15
Not sure how I found this but I'm glad I did. One chapter in and I'm sure I'll be here until the end. If you like this style of story line there is another one I read a few years ago called Counting on Rain if you're interested and can't find it let me know. Now I'm off to continue
| sujari6 chapter 57 . 3/14
Loved this story. Great ending.
| MrsRPTaylor chapter 57 . 3/13
Such a beautiful and well written story. I loved reading it. It's been a while since I've read a fanfiction as good as this one, so thank you for reminding me why I love this site.
| smood5 chapter 57 . 3/12
I can't get over how much this has affected me. This one was truly one of a kind and I wish you luck in all you do as you have amazing talent. Love your Edward and Bella. But also for once I've liked the other characters too. (Especially Esme and Jasper!) thank you so much for this! Loved it. :)
| Sarah chapter 15 . 3/10
I can appreciate Bella needing to be a bit more assertive. However, I hope you don't overdo it. I've read so many stories where Bella goes way too far with the bitchiness. It's a bummer, and I end up using the red X. I really don't want that to happen with this story.
On another note ... I do like this story. It is very well-written. I also really like that you use different POVs. You do it effectively.
| philipno2 chapter 57 . 3/12
Oh my gosh! I can't believe it's finished! Seriously one of the best stories I've ever read on here. I don't think I've ever felt so much emotion reading a story online. I remember one chapter where I was literally shaking because I was crying so hard. Congrats. Continue to write, you're awesome!
| me chapter 57 . 3/9
yes! happy ending love it!
| xXOtherAliceXx chapter 20 . 3/11
This is creepy. They are almost keeping her prisoner with the guise of caring.
| xXOtherAliceXx chapter 17 . 3/11
I hate this Bella.
| xXOtherAliceXx chapter 15 . 3/11
So, she isn't mad at Edward, but gets mad at Alice? Bella just barely started functioning. While it isn't wise to push the envelope, Bella is acting pretty damn ungrateful that they saved her from that hell hole.
| xXOtherAliceXx chapter 14 . 3/11
This seems creepy. Bella is just suppose to forgive Edward for what basically destroyed her being, because "he loves her"... Ugh :/.