|Reviews for Breakdown|
| BrunetteFanpire chapter 30 . 9/21
HAHAHA this chapter is hilarious!
| EeWee chapter 57 . 8/25
Wonderful wonderful story. I love New Moon alternatives and this was just great. Thank you for sharing.
| americannight99 chapter 30 . 8/14
OMG I couldn't stop laughing. absolutely love this chapter
| monica03 chapter 57 . 8/11
Great story. I throughly enjoyed it. I loved the spin you put on Bella's handling of his leaving. Also loved how the storyline with Victoria played out.
| FlamingMaple chapter 53 . 7/10
Love this twist!
| FlamingMaple chapter 1 . 7/8
Oh, I had such a good laugh out of this. Totally OOC reactions, but sooo cute!
| tanseynz chapter 57 . 6/15
I enjoyed this story a lot. You never let it sag or become tedious, and kept to canon but without the weak points. And I was constantly amused at your take on Edward, an eternal seventeen year old with all the rollercoaster emotions of that age. Bella will really need to be forever patient.
| tanseynz chapter 7 . 6/13
I LOVE Anthony!
‘When you won’t even talk to your own hallucination, it might be time to pack it in.’
Snarky, and definitely Bella.
There’s nothing static about her - she’s just internalising it, and Edward being there is like a pickaxe in the dam!
| tanseynz chapter 1 . 6/13
Riveting already. Strong and very well written and you’ve laid out a believable and appealing plotline. I do love a complex long story!
| S1203 chapter 19 . 5/12
Uh! Tnx for explanation... and, phone ringing is, of course, Alice, who saw when B make decision... Thank you.
| MyladyNancy chapter 57 . 3/12
I loved your story. I appreciated being told when to skip chapters for lemons. I was disappointed when I found out there was only one story. I could live in your world for a long time.
| MyladyNancy chapter 30 . 3/7
that was to cute. I can just see them standing in the aisle trying to figure out the problem...
| Lillywhite1 chapter 57 . 2/13
Thanks for writing this wonderful story!
| anyeshabaner chapter 57 . 11/20/2017
best story ever! oh how i loved reading each word and each sentence!
| Ruth786 chapter 57 . 10/31/2017
That’s was a phenomenal story. The detail and combined perspectives gave such amazing the characters and story. I theory hope you write another story.