Reviews for The Space Between
Guest chapter 27 . 8/28/2014
I think its good that you are told to remove the story. Sure there are people who like your stories and want to read them. You are after all very talented, but the rules of the site are quite clear and you chose to violate them.

ps. I didn't report you, just in case you did because of my review.
Breaking Dawn21 chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
Hope your stories don't get taken down
cctwilight chapter 27 . 8/28/2014
I will be following you. I can't believe they are doing this crap again!
Azucena34 chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
The Story is perfect, just the right ending, sadly, he never really looked for real help. Your story seemed real, most men would not look for help either.
It is lovely that Bella found her quiet and lovely love, and sad that we didn't get to see how Edward truly developed his love to Heidi.
I am sad that you got slack from the fandom, I do enjoy your writing immensely, thank you for my hours of enjoyment.
Azucena
mrsbadfan chapter 13 . 1/9/2014
Tell them to go take. a. long walk off. A short pier hon your stories are great. Hugs xxxxx
Mitzi1958 chapter 26 . 12/23/2013
What a sad sequel for Edward. I am glad that Bella found happiness with Riley, her little girl and Seth, she more than deserved it after all what did she do to be so cruelly treated by Edward in both stories. While some of your readers did not like that you wrote a cheating Beela in the sequel I think she needed to do it. Edward took away every bit of confidence she had in herself and while she got some of it back, she really needed to get it back from Edward. I think it boasted her up to know that the person who threw her away over someone that meant nothing to him that she could still make him desire her and would till the day he died.
At the end of the epilogue it made me sad to see Edward settle for someone or should I say a relationship that as he said it himself was lukewarm at best. To go through life settling for lukewarm when you had the best but were to stupid, stubborn and to much a jackass to see and value what was right in front of him. To settle with a woman that was a cheater too, makes me wonder if the two of them could ever really trust one another. I mean they proven to all who know them and to themselves that they can lie, cheat and tear people and their lives apart. What good examples they can be to their children, to show them how not to treat their spouses.
It always makes me super mad when I hear or read someone say I never meant to hurt you, that's bullshit!' They do not think about their spouses, their children or anyone else, cheating is a Shelfess act, my ex brother-in-law to my knowledge never said he was sorry to his four children and to me that is needs the apology the most. The children are mess-up for the rest of their life's and most have trust issues!
I wonder if cheating people who get together with other cheaters are always thinking is he or she cheating of them. I know I would bever trust a cheater because they have shown to me that they can not be trusted.
Mitzi1958 chapter 25 . 12/16/2013
I GOT IT! The perfect revenge for Edward. Heide cheats on Edward (being married or not , but I think it would hurt more if they were hitched) and he finds out, she containous to cheat but after awhile she leves him and then he would finally understand what he has done to Bella. I still feel he isn't getting it. What a spoilt big brat he is, always getting everything he wants since he was a child. Esme has a lot to answer for that maybe even Carlisle. If I knew Edward in RL I would tell every woman too run. In fact my ex brother-in-law's sisters told my sister to run, he's an ass. Of course she didn't and got her heart torn out of her and had it handed to her by her ex. Ladies just a warning if his sisters tell you to run listen to them they are women and know a asshole and a player when they see one.
Cath Robsteniana chapter 26 . 11/22/2013
No words for all this story. It's so damn sad, but also real, and i tell u that it touch me so deeply.
I can even say anymore, sorry for this poor review.
Thanks for writing it.
Kisses and a huge hug.
DcOliver FanFiction chapter 26 . 9/15/2013
Just read all three parts of this, totally brilliant.
the tears are still pouring down my cheeks,
so well written, loved it.
Thank you.
Jadedmoments chapter 6 . 8/29/2013
I don't get other people's reviews saying "this time it's different 'cause he's cheating with Bella"
No it's not, it's cheating all the same, as much as I want these 2 to end up together, I hoped Edward turned her down and showed Bella that he has in fact changed. Now he's just falling into old habits.

And Bella seducing him? Was it a test? I can't believe she would let him do that to someone else when she knows how much it hurts when you're betrayed like that..

Oh well I trust your judgement on this story.. On to the next chapter to see where you'll lead me :)
EdwardLuver28 chapter 26 . 8/5/2013
Aww, so sad. I think that Bella and Edward are soul mates but didn't work and they found another love. Or they were just first loves and will always love each other. I don't know.

Wow, great work. Still sad though.
EdwardLuver28 chapter 25 . 8/5/2013
Oh my god! Tears!
EdwardLuver28 chapter 24 . 8/5/2013
I am crying. It is so happy and so sad.

It's also weird with no Bella/Edward but its necessary and it's how true life goes sometimes.
EdwardLuver28 chapter 23 . 8/5/2013
So they are together again?
EdwardLuver28 chapter 22 . 8/5/2013
You know, I hope they end up together and I don't.
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