Reviews for Juliet Never Wore Converses
Curlscat chapter 13 . 12/31/2012
Are you sure there's a narrator? I didn't think there was a narrator in Romeo and Juliet...

Adrienne was the one that was a natural, right?
Curlscat chapter 12 . 12/31/2012
Sabrina, wake up! You don't have to get up because it's snowing! ...Oh, thank you...

That's pretty much what just happened.

I'm surprised. I thought this chapter was going to pick up where the last one left off, and it's not.

I would totally have hidden inside and let everyone think I was just a really awesome hider.
Curlscat chapter 11 . 12/31/2012
...I thought she'd already picked the stage crew...

I'm enjoying this. Thought you might like to know.
Reflections of Twilight chapter 27 . 12/31/2012
My Answer: You are cruel for making those poor woodchuck chuck wood! I am in an organization that protects woodchucks and teaches them how to use pre-chucked driftwood.

Yeah... That works, I guess.

Poor sick Sabrina...

I'll vote for you. ;)

Happy New Year!
Luffles, Sunsets
muzicoftheheart chapter 27 . 12/31/2012
This chapter was so adorable! I loved it! I hope Sabrina feels better!
QOTD: Well, if a woodchuck could chuck wood to a very quantable amount, we wouldn't need to know how much, it'd be to large to count! :)
Archer Princess chapter 27 . 12/31/2012
Well helloooooo! Long time, no see!

Uh oh, Sabrina is SICK! I know the feeling... you are closing in on showtime, and you lose your voice. Not fun.

Yeah... so school for sick people! Of course, all my knowledge of this comes from reading. I'm homeschooled, and unless I am too tired to even read, I must continue through the PLAGUE!

Haha! Veronica is freakin' amazing, but I agree with Puck: That woman is SCARY!

...and reminds me of my own mother. Huh. That is what my mom would say to me, in an around the whole creepy mother talking about how dating works...

See, that is something I generally disagree with when I read fics where Sabrina is an adult. I always wonder why she would go to college etc to become a LEGAL attorney when all she has to do is work in FPL and then fake her way into NYC! ...although I guess that she might want to do it the "normal" way.

Hoooooo boy... Here comes Henry!

Say WHAAAAAAAAAAA? I was not exactly expecting Henry to say that. Although I know that he does have to eventually say that...

CONFUSED: So... before Henry came in, she was hungry. Then he comes in, tells her he is okay with her dating Puck. Then she turns down the soup. Just letting you know...

Aww... Father/Daughter time... I love spending time with my dad!

Congrats on your nomination!

QotD: I'm not feeling that creative right now (it is 1:30am), sooooooo...
A WOODCHUCK WOULD CHUCK ALL THE WOOD A WOODCHUCK COULD CHUCK IS A WOODCHUCK COULD CHUCK WOOD!

Also, a woodchuck can chuck a lot of wood, as a woodchuck can chuck wood. So your question is invalid.

...AND A HAPPYYYYYY NEWWWWWWW YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAR! :D

-Archer Princess-
julygem chapter 27 . 12/31/2012
GAH I love this story too much, it's just...inconceivably good.
The Grey Waren chapter 27 . 12/31/2012
Response to Qotd: 3 1/2
Key-2-Soul chapter 26 . 12/30/2012
:O :O:O A-are you serious?! The story is great. but you ended RIGHT there... YOU ARE MAKING ME GO CRAZY!xD The whole situation and the play coming up and you pick now to stop :P Just because you like suspense apparently... Doesn't mean we do! I'm goin to die soon if you don't update...

update soon...

Update...

You wouldn't want me to die would you?

UPDATE!

I'm goin to die... And it's goin to be your fault. Hope you like prison... Murderer... * Now is dead*

* comes back from the dead*

Update

I will haunt you for the rest of eternity...

I don't think you would like that...

You should really update...

Eternity is a really long time...

Please update soon! I love the story and I love where it is going... :D
Curlscat chapter 10 . 12/30/2012
Yes. Yes I did enjoy this more. Much more. :)
Curlscat chapter 9 . 12/30/2012
I do hope that Scarlett doesn't turn into a Mary Sue. :)

Puck just makes me want to smack him sometimes, you know?
Curlscat chapter 8 . 12/30/2012
Why is :S a sour face? How is it sour?

Puck might have convinced Scarlett that he was over Sabrina if he'd told her they'd tried dating and failed. (Also... Scarlett makes out with people she's not dating or interested in dating? Awkward...)

Puck, you just failed at that turn-over-a-new-leaf thing.
Curlscat chapter 7 . 12/30/2012
Silly Sabrina. He had to change to become what he is now.

GAH! You did this is City of Lights, too! You hinted and hinted until I was nuts before you explained it all! BLARGH.
Curlscat chapter 6 . 12/30/2012
You know dialogue goes with the person who's speaking's actions, right? Not at the beginning of every paragraph? Because you do this: " "Normal people don't get flown home by their Everafter…" Puck smirked.

"Everafter what? What exactly am I to you, Grimm?" Sabrina closed her mouth, pondering this for a moment.

"Normal people don't get flown home by their Everafter enemy." Puck sighed.

"Of course. Now, just let me fly you home," he practically begged. "I have a huge math test tomorrow and I need you to help me with studying." Sabrina groaned.

"I totally forgot that I have to help you study tonight!" Sabrina confessed. "But I can't, I have a science quiz tomorrow…" "

When it ought to be this: " "Normal people don't get flown home by their Everafter…"

Puck smirked. "Everafter what? What exactly am I to you, Grimm?"

Sabrina closed her mouth, pondering this for a moment. "Normal people don't get flown home by their Everafter enemy."

Puck sighed."Of course. Now, just let me fly you home," he practically begged. "I have a huge math test tomorrow and I need you to help me with studying."

Sabrina groaned. "I totally forgot that I have to help you study tonight!" Sabrina confessed. "But I can't, I have a science quiz tomorrow…" "

See the difference? This way, Sabrina's actions are with Sabrina's words, and Puck's are with his. It's much less confusing. You don't have to open a new paragraph with dialogue all the time, you can open it with actions.
Curlscat chapter 5 . 12/30/2012
You know what you are? You're lazy. It's the truth. You're good, you give the public what they want, and you're popular, so you slack on your mechanics. Well, let me tell you, missy, that saddens me. Because I KNOW you can do better.
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