|Reviews for For Want of a Knight|
| The-Sun-Princess chapter 16 . 1/11
Well this is a fun take on Pokemon Colosseum (already a very fun game.)
And sporadic updates are better than a dead fic, so I'll take it, since there aren't very many decent Colosseum fics out there
| JayEyedWolf chapter 16 . 11/12/2013
Not sure how I feel about this chapter. While I am like, "CHAPTERYESYESCHAPTER" at the same time nothing much happens.
Still, we get to watch Wes being sneaky and a bit snarky, so all's well I suppose.
| JayEyedWolf chapter 15 . 10/18/2013
FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY
FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY
...That's all for today.
| Ultimate Black Ace chapter 15 . 10/18/2013
Ooh, Wes is back in the game. Nice. No Espeon, no Umbreon, just some Pokemon that he got from some random peon. Looking forward to when his path crosses with Rui's, if it ever does. It's a big region and though their paths might come close in their battle against Cipher, there's no guarantee that they have to meet.
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/20/2013
please ypdate soon, i keep rereading it wishing to see what happens next
| Ultimate Black Ace chapter 14 . 1/1/2013
I guess that they didn't need the elevator key to get down there after all. Still, Rui, Silva and Plusle don't stand a chance in a direct fight with the Cipher agents in the Under.
Hopefully Rui won't end up with brain damage once this fic is finished.
Sorry this review doesn't have much to it, I'm currently suffering jet-lag. Not at full mental capacity here.
| Ultimate Black Ace chapter 13 . 8/5/2012
Very nice, very nice. You've done a great job introducing some of the ideas that we brought up, and all subtly. The conversation and personality mechanics of Ein and Mirror B together were hilarious.
Realgam Tower is opening up in two days, that doesn't leave much time left to destroy Cipher's plan. Especially seeing as Rui only just escaped and Wes is missing and probably running from Snagem, if Gonzap knows he escaped yet.
Subject T-04, is that Tyranitar, or something else, something worse, I wonder? I mean there are also a few of the newer Legendaries such as Terrakion, Thundurus and Tornadus who also start with T, and that's only if it's a pokemon starting with T at all. I'm only thinking of this because you have a habit of going against expectations.
| Ted chapter 12 . 5/29/2012
I really like this story. I hope you would continue it. I hate to see it unfinished.
Just one question... In the last chapter it sounded like they had already escape but in this chapter they where just getting out. So does the last chapter happen after this or where they different people?
| Ultimate Black Ace chapter 12 . 5/18/2012
Very nice, glad to see this back. So, I take it that now Rui has the first two shadow pokemon (Remorraid and Mantine right?), and may get Plusle in her party too. Maybe in this version of Colosseum she'll actually DO something with the pokemon for once.
| Argen-Lobo-Ridder chapter 11 . 3/13/2012
Why if he had help from a girl carrying a wrench and a mad eletric Pokemon of course!
Alright we've got excitment going on now! Thanks for updating.
| Shiny Kirby chapter 7 . 1/19/2012
Finally, a Pokémon Colosseum story! I haven't seen any Colosseum stories in a long time, and I'm a huge ColosseumShipping fan.
I like it, please keep going!
| Bradley8155 chapter 6 . 1/8/2012
Yay! I love Wes! Please update soon!
| Pokeshipper-Reborn chapter 3 . 1/4/2012
Another good chapter! I like the way you let us know only what Rui could see and hear. It made for an unusual sort of storytelling.
So now there's some guy with a Castform who may or may not end up being Rui's savior, Rui has proved that she is not, in fact, a wallflower, and the goons have reasserted their impressive lack of a brain cell between them. That sounds a very good chapter to me.
Can't wait for more! Keep it up!
| Pokeshipper-Reborn chapter 2 . 1/3/2012
Well, I'm in. I can't wait to see where this one goes. Wes and Rui don't get enough love around FFnet, and I'm a total Colosseumshipper.
But anyway, this is a really good start. So Rui is Misty's cousin? I never thought of that, but it's a nice little twist, considering how they look alike. That opens up some interesting possibilities later on.
I really like the idea behind this, and you're off to a good start. Good luck and keep it up!