|Reviews for Clash of the Alphas|
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 45 . 1/17
Your battle is very exciting and well organized! It makes sense for so many order members to die because the death eaters would have been targeting them. Good job!
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 41 . 1/17
Harry's strategy is excellent and I love his confrontation with Dumbledore!
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 34 . 1/17
I really like Remus's first class where he told everyone to hide.
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 33 . 1/17
I enjoy reading the strategizing sessions that you wrote in this chapter.
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 30 . 1/16
Yay, Viktor saves the day and Lupin is back!
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 29 . 1/16
Bill and Fleur's wedding was well written! I especially love Tonks arresting all those Death Eaters. Now I'm worried about them being sent to Azkaban with the untrustworthy dementors. . . .
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 27 . 1/16
Hmmm. I wonder when Amelia Bones and the Wizengamot will get rid of the dementors. I guess if they send criminals through the veil they won't need the dementors any more . . . .
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 26 . 1/16
I enjoyed reading the trip to the amusement park.
I'm still trying to figure out how Sirius tricked Harry into barging in on Tracey and Theo.
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 24 . 1/16
You wrote a great scene with Maya and her brother escaping. At first I was afraid that their parents might be able to follow them. I guess they can't hear the floo address unless the secret keeper tells them. The first time I read this chapter I got mixed up and thought that Daniella Davis had been the secret keeper but now I know that it was one of the other moms.
I appreciate the huge amount of time that you spent writing this trilogy. Someone recommended recently on Reddit, so I hop it makes a great comeback!
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 23 . 1/16
I love your end of term party. I'm still trying to figure out why Dumbledore didn't bring up the cave with the locket but I guess I'll find out in seventh year. Thank you again for writing this almost six years ago!
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 19 . 1/16
Sad to lose Samuel and Daniella. They were very vivid characters. Ill probably keep picturing them in my mind when I read other fanfiction with Tracy Davis in them. So they will live on in their own way. :)
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 18 . 1/16
I like the way your battles and training exercises are so varied and creative. :)
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 16 . 1/16
I love your trick of having Kreacher go fetch Hufflepuff's cup.
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 14 . 1/16
I can't wait to see what Snaps ends up contributing. I wonder when Dumbledore will tell him that Harry is a horcrux or if he already knows.
| JKRisTheGoddess chapter 12 . 1/16
I like the way Ron is showing that he can strategize on more than just chess.