Reviews for Harry Potter and the Wizard Lanterns
JhonIsIrritated chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Please, please! fix your grammar, word choice and spelling, i am sorry but it is killing me! (metaphorically of course) Spell Check was invented for a reason!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
yo, you need to work on your punctuation. there is a lack of full stopes, particulay in the longer "sentences", aka paragraphs.

Also in your summary, you havn't capaitalised the words Dursleys or Hogwarts but you have capitalised Ron Harry Hermione.
SwordMasterZ chapter 2 . 1/11/2012
nice how about you have the bad guys mess around with yellow rings
SwordMasterZ chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Nice verry creative are you planing to have any canen GL Characters show up. update soon.