Reviews for Beginning
chromeknickers chapter 1 . 7/15/2016
"There seem to be all these messages in her eyes, and he gets frustrated with himself for being unable to decipher them." - Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! Honestly, you have these two down PAT. The characterisation is flawless and the entire scenario just makes me melt. An instant favourite. Stunning!
Nocturnal Elle chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
oh man, that last line is great.
The Cuteness chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Omg that has got to be one of the sexiest things I've ever read. Please ad more to this if you can. I want to see what else could happen to them in this type of storyline.
Anjie chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Aww poor Simon, but oh do I love him so much. I really liked how you characterized Alisha-having her remain herself but then be sensitive to Simon's needs at the same time. Good story.
thricecursed chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
This is beautifully written! I do love the intensity of these two. Oh, please write more! Xc
Halawia chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
dayum did i love this. seriously. so fucking good.

him sleeping in her arms at the end made me smile, and there were so many scenes that had my heart racing. You do sexual tension well. And I loved that bit with him admitting to her that he was cold.

*sigh* this may be my favorite misfits story so far. please tell me you're going to continue it.