|Reviews for Fireworks|
| AKAAkira chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
For being in no way linked, both Aiyannahs have a very interesting crush on Alpin...haha.
Again, cute little fluff story. I seem to be noticing multiple dialogue narrations in just one paragraph...or maybe they just stand out more because of some other story I read.
Either way, the conclusion was much more satisfying this time, with no less of the sweetness that, as another author put it, gave me severe cavities for which I'm afraid I'll have to charge you the dental bill. Specific points: the mouse-like sneeze was a nicely unique and relateable trait, heh, and the fireworks were a very serenely appropriate location, both for the milieu and the title.
Very nice piece.