Reviews for Guardians of Elpis
yellow 14 chapter 4 . 6/3/2012
Yes I imagine your parents were less than pleased with you using their bed to practise;D Another wonderful scene, I liked the fish getting up. I wonder how many people would eat fish if it did that?;D I suspect that Mel wouldn't be particularly sorry to have killed her unsuspecting stepfather (I know we're seeing it from her side only, but he seems to be a bit of an a***) The perpetually hungry teenage boy. So very typical and very real. It gets worse at around seventeen;D I liked Shin's realisation about her family bonding with her, very good. Keep updating
DayDreamer9 chapter 4 . 6/1/2012
"thumbs up"

Pity it didn't hit the jerk, with the way he sounds, but I enjoyed it just like last time. I can't wait to see how Chapter 5 turns out and I wish you the best of luck :)
yellow 14 chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
Sorry this reviews late Ellie, RL keeps getting in the way. As usual, the quality is outstanding, but that is pretty much a given with you. I have to love Katie's debut of power. You get a bunch of 'charming' young men (Yes that was irony) and give them a taste of their own medicine;D I love how she thinks she's losing her mind;D And Sandra, she's a lot like you as far as I can tell, although I hope your health is far better. Writing to get away from the world. Why does that seem so familiar?;D I love her cats as well, they're so;D Keep updating
Evilness321 chapter 3 . 5/28/2012
Oh, so now you're blaming ME outright for taking so long? I see how you are :P

But in all seriousness, I like how this came together! Without revealing too much about the editing process of this chapter in particular, you did a better job than I did at conveying that extreme case of denial over what happened ; Gotta love denial in the face of the unknown xD

And poor Katie! I wanna get in there and "Waterbend" Those jerks' asses
DayDreamer9 chapter 3 . 5/28/2012
Sandra was even better than Gina "thumbs up" And those boys still got what they deserved. I'm glad that things are going so well for you two :)
yellow 14 chapter 2 . 1/3/2012
Did she just teleport. I expect great writing from you Sokai. I am not disappoited. Really creepy intro, keep updating
DayDreamer9 chapter 2 . 1/2/2012

Can't wait to meet Sandra :)
Evilness321 chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Yaay! It's finally up, thanks to me sitting my fat ass down finally and stopping with the procrastinating or risk being burned alive by you. And I actually quite like the edits you did Made it seem more... 'otherworldly' and such. I'd forgotten some of what I'd written, honestly. So when I saw that you'd updated the story, I decided 'why not?'


Hopefully the 'old fans' of Eos will like my different style of writing from the other former author just as much, is all I can hope for
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
I don't do Batgirl, so I must decline. Good news about the Royal Guardian fic I hope. This may seem like I'm nit-picking, but why bring Candracar and W.I.T.C.H into this at all if they're not going to be involved at all? Very good start, I am interested to say the least. Keep updating
DayDreamer9 chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
I've been waiting for this to come out and I must say, it sounds a lot more organized than Eos was. I look forwards to see what comes next; I'm honestly excited about it :) Happy New Year to you both!