Reviews for Fatty
Neapinea chapter 19 . 9/7
Poor Edward..
supremeloser chapter 32 . 8/2
OMG MY NAME IS FAITH! So cute
thelightnina chapter 28 . 11/11/2023
I feel like this relationship is so rushed.
fanfictionalcolic chapter 33 . 9/6/2022
Sweet story
Sapphire Archeron Cullen chapter 23 . 3/17/2022
Oh sweet Bella, Edward is the Batman, honey...
Kksmum chapter 33 . 6/15/2021
Awesome story. Loved it. Thank you.
twirob chapter 33 . 5/11/2021
AWESOME ! AMAZING story ;) The timing of the story arc was a bit confusing but readable ;) Shouldn't the hospital be liable for her hysterectomy? :( Thanks for sharing ;D
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 19 . 8/1/2020
Ok now it makes absolutely no sense why she was with Jake.. It would have worked the same without her agreeing go on dates with is insecure, he would have figured she'd want jake, see? The same.
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 18 . 8/1/2020
He's a virgin, why can't their moment be special and not some spur of the moment bs... It's always like this when the dude is the virgin...

When the girl is the virgin, it's made a vocal point of the story and it's worked up too. But when the dude is, it's hardly ever mentioned, when it is, it's mostly to joke about
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 15 . 8/1/2020
Ok I can definitely see why you got shit on...

Edward says, he wants to fit in and be normal... Do you not see how people may find that offensive?
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 14 . 8/1/2020
She can't give him her love but she can give him her body tho?
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 12 . 8/1/2020
You making Edward a fragile weak big person is offensive, cause apparently the only way things can go right in life for you is if you lose weight.

That isn't true, no amount of weight loss or gain can change who you are as a person, if you are piece of shit fat person, you will be a piece of shit skinny person, and vice versa.
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 11 . 8/1/2020
She weights like a buck 25, if he can't carry her even before he started working out, he wasn't a man.

And really, if she was interested in Edward, why did she start seeing Jacob. that makes no sense.
Patriciadiane chapter 33 . 6/6/2020
Wonderful ending for an amazing story
Love how their family and how it grew. The wanting to see daddy’s junk holy cow. Best ever.
Patriciadiane chapter 32 . 6/6/2020
You scared me for a minute or two
Wow. great as I expected
Thank you
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