Reviews for Fatty |
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Neapinea chapter 19 . 9/7 Poor Edward.. |
supremeloser chapter 32 . 8/2 OMG MY NAME IS FAITH! So cute |
thelightnina chapter 28 . 11/11/2023 I feel like this relationship is so rushed. |
fanfictionalcolic chapter 33 . 9/6/2022 Sweet story |
Sapphire Archeron Cullen chapter 23 . 3/17/2022 Oh sweet Bella, Edward is the Batman, honey... |
Kksmum chapter 33 . 6/15/2021 Awesome story. Loved it. Thank you. |
twirob chapter 33 . 5/11/2021 AWESOME ! AMAZING story ;) The timing of the story arc was a bit confusing but readable ;) Shouldn't the hospital be liable for her hysterectomy? :( Thanks for sharing ;D |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 19 . 8/1/2020 Ok now it makes absolutely no sense why she was with Jake.. It would have worked the same without her agreeing go on dates with is insecure, he would have figured she'd want jake, see? The same. |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 18 . 8/1/2020 He's a virgin, why can't their moment be special and not some spur of the moment bs... It's always like this when the dude is the virgin... When the girl is the virgin, it's made a vocal point of the story and it's worked up too. But when the dude is, it's hardly ever mentioned, when it is, it's mostly to joke about |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 15 . 8/1/2020 Ok I can definitely see why you got shit on... Edward says, he wants to fit in and be normal... Do you not see how people may find that offensive? |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 14 . 8/1/2020 She can't give him her love but she can give him her body tho? |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 12 . 8/1/2020 You making Edward a fragile weak big person is offensive, cause apparently the only way things can go right in life for you is if you lose weight. That isn't true, no amount of weight loss or gain can change who you are as a person, if you are piece of shit fat person, you will be a piece of shit skinny person, and vice versa. |
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 11 . 8/1/2020 She weights like a buck 25, if he can't carry her even before he started working out, he wasn't a man. And really, if she was interested in Edward, why did she start seeing Jacob. that makes no sense. |
Patriciadiane chapter 33 . 6/6/2020 Wonderful ending for an amazing story Love how their family and how it grew. The wanting to see daddy’s junk holy cow. Best ever. |
Patriciadiane chapter 32 . 6/6/2020 You scared me for a minute or two Wow. great as I expected Thank you |