Reviews for Fatty |
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Eli42 chapter 33 . 11/17/2015 I really like how this story didn't end with "and everybody got really thin and got with not excess skin and stretch marks the end." This was realistic. Thank you. |
Riam chapter 33 . 10/9/2015 A lovely story with a most unusual ending. Thank you . |
LydiaSt.James chapter 32 . 7/2/2015 Way to give me a heart attack. Good lord. |
ChristyWIX chapter 33 . 3/25/2015 So wait, Aiden will have Edward as his dad and both Bella and Sara as his mom . . . won't that confuse the hell out of the kid? I guess it wouldn't if that is all he knows. Very odd ending. Good story. I'm glad they are all so happy now. |
ChristyWIX chapter 32 . 3/25/2015 Well, it worked and the did finally manage to get pregnant. The surgeon nicked the artery and they caused the damage? Yikes, that sucks! At least Faith is healthy and strong. And yes, they can most definitely adopt. Interesting route to take on this though. I give you kudos for being so different. |
ChristyWIX chapter 31 . 3/25/2015 I was sad for them that they weren't pregnant but, at least they are trying. It can take forever to get pregnant for a lot of women. The fics that have them getting pregnant on the very first time they ever have sex is the less believable of the stories. At least you're keeping it real. I'm glad she finally noticed that they had turned into sex machines and decided to let things happen when they happen. Loved his romantic getaway and his dominant side . . . go Edward! |
ChristyWIX chapter 30 . 3/25/2015 Inseam measurements . . . funny! Her letting him know his 'manbits' were actually functioning, was very funny to read. She made him come in his pants like a teenage boy. So funny. My head went to the same place as Edward's when he found a distraught Bella . . . Jake can walk her down the aisle. Yay, she's pregnant! They wanted that, so it is great that it is happening. |
ChristyWIX chapter 29 . 3/25/2015 I realize this was Edward's freak out chapter but, why did Bella to say much in the session with Banner? They were in there for two hours, yet Edward said she barely spoke the whole time. It was just an odd off comment that he made, that just stuck in my head. Four months! They've been engaged for four months already and he never thought to get her a ring? Well, I know now why she'd been crying here and there at the beginning of the chapter . . . blaming it on being tired. I would feel a bit like her too. Wondering if he was having second thoughts. However, isn't that what their therapy is for? Shouldn't she have brought this up a few months ago. She is still bottling things up . . . and clearly so is he. I'm starting to wonder if they are doomed with all of their insecurities. :( |
ChristyWIX chapter 28 . 3/25/2015 Awww, Edward is really good at encouraging people to do things. That conversation with him and Jake went so very well. He gets people and he has a way of getting them to do things they wouldn't normally do. He may be a good asset to Bella's own company. Don't know if they can afford that though . . . finances have never been mentioned in this. With the exception of Bella paying for Jake's rehab. I'm really happy that it seems Kate may be out of there soon. Poor Edward, relocate, ugh. I think he would quit before he would choose to leave Bella. I quit a job for that very reason, I wasn't about to be apart from my husband, pfft. The therapy doesn't seem to be working on Bella, if that was her way of reacting to his news. Instead of talking with him about it, she start to ramble the crap all over again . . . grrrr. It was cute that patrons and waitress thought that he just proposed, so he figured, why the heck not and did so. Very cute. |
ChristyWIX chapter 27 . 3/25/2015 Fantastic chapter. Banner was great to sit back and wait on Edward's mini-explosion. He certainly got it all out there, didn't he? Now they can start healing. I agree with Edward . . . Kate needs to go. I do like the way Bella thinks though . . . call around the other places, hire Kate out from under Bella . . . making Kate feel like she won, when in fact, it would be BxE winning. Love that their playfulness in the bedroom is still there. Yes, very good last line there. |
ChristyWIX chapter 26 . 3/25/2015 I love that he could only go so far as the curb outside the house. That means so much and shows just how very much he loves her. We know he does, she just can't let herself believe it fully. I loved that he called Alice and asked her to come over right away . . . and that she did. Alice taking the time to listen to Edward first and noticing how broken he was. Then going in to speak to Bella. Great friends that they share. Edward going straight to Jake and yelling at him. So glad to learn that Bella went behind Jake's back on that one . . . and that Jake would not have helped her gain access to drugs. I liked that Jake fought back and that he cried it out. The part about him getting caught in the shower was funny. Good play there to ease their tension. Coming back to the house and overhearing AxB talking . . . I don't blame him for eavesdropping at all. Gotta say, I would've done the same. You made me so very happy with her saying she needs to go speak to someone . . . and him agreeing that he would benefit from that as well . . . YAY! |
ChristyWIX chapter 25 . 3/25/2015 I really can't stand Kate. She is doing this to Bella on purpose, as she wants 'the big guy'. Yes, Bella needs some serious help with a professional . . . but, Kate did all of that to cause a rift between them. I also think that Kate won't hesitate to say something about the shower to Bella. Placing even more doubt into Bella's overtaxed brain. Edward failed to mention that to Bella in his outrage over the drugs and possible baby. I do wonder if that is the reason for her weight gain though. They did have unprotected sex and she could be putting on the pounds as a result. However, with the drugs she's been using, it could have done serious damage to the baby. So, for their sakes, I hope she isn't pregnant. I hope he doesn't stay away too long . . . she won't be able to handle that at all. She'll think the absolute worst. Kate making sure to make her feel the pressure even more. |
ChristyWIX chapter 24 . 3/24/2015 I think Alice may be pregnant. That was nice that all their friends and family raced as well. Poor Bella . . . I'm glad she pushed Edward to finish . . . and really proud that he did finish. Great chapter. |
ChristyWIX chapter 23 . 3/24/2015 Okay, sounds to me like neither of these two have seen a therapist yet. They have to get over these insecurities. Otherwise, they will never get to solid ground with each other. He loves her and she just can't accept it. Why the hell would she hire Kate, if she was feeling inadequate next to her? It's her business, she shouldn't feel uncomfortable in it. |
ChristyWIX chapter 22 . 3/24/2015 I was wondering if we would run into that ex of hers at one point or another. I'm glad Edward didn't go all feral with jealousy on Riley's ass. Thank you for keeping Edward mature. Riley's immaturity shone through brightly though. With his 'Edmund', his glare at Edward and hugging her inappropriately too long. Asshat! I like that they got past it so quickly too. |