Reviews for Fatty |
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ChristyWIX chapter 6 . 3/24/2015 Well, since I am female, her reaction to Jake's words spoke volumes to me. Poor ExB, they like each other. Edward is too insecure and we aren't privy to BPOV, other than that little glimpse of her being disappointed. Eek! |
ChristyWIX chapter 5 . 3/24/2015 OMG! He finished the 5K . . . yay! I would totally have the silly putty tummy and legs . . . I'm so freaking old and fluffy, that the fluff would be gone and the skin would stay there . . . eek! Jasper wanting to come and work out with him is fantastic! I love that he actually is looking forward to meeting him. Nice change. The work thing is a mystery. I was a skinny until my early adulthood. My whole working adult life, I've been overweight and never once has it affected any sort of my job in any capacity. It was odd that his work would treat him that way. She kissed his cheek . . . soooooo sweet. Swoony-sigh. |
ChristyWIX chapter 4 . 3/24/2015 Thank you for having Emmett stick up for his brother in this one. It was so sad that he was allowing it at all, regardless of the weight loss. Good for Jasper and his encouragement. I wonder if Bella sees Edward the way Bella's in the fandom normally see their Edward's? I hope so. I hope she likes him already . . . the way he is now. Wanting to and encouraging him to, be his best self. |
ChristyWIX chapter 3 . 3/24/2015 Wow, Rose was extremely harsh. I can't believe his own brother lets her talk to him like that. Nice freaking family. If anyone ever said something like that about me in front of my brother, he would verbally assault the asshat so fast they wouldn't know what happened. So would my husband. Actually, I've quite the mouth on me, I would say something. Poor Edward. |
ChristyWIX chapter 2 . 3/24/2015 Awww, you made me sad in this part . . . he had no idea he'd gotten to 363 and he had no idea he was crying. I need to lose weight and work from home, not because I am hiding. My employer is in Chicago, and I live in San Francisco . . . no office to go to. |
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 3/24/2015 Very intriguing start . . . |
Guest chapter 33 . 2/21/2015 this story was so beautiful! LOVED IT! and the way you tried to encourage people through your comments is amazing! You've given me my last boost to actually do something about my few extra pounds. so thank you! :) |
Pink Bead Girl chapter 33 . 12/12/2014 What a lovely, lovely ending. I never expected them to take both Sara and Aiden but I am glad they did. You've made your version of Edward and Bella something truly remarkable and I am so glad you shared it with all of us. Thank you for such a pleasurable interlude away from real life. Enjoyed every minute. |
Pink Bead Girl chapter 32 . 12/12/2014 How wonderful! You kept me on that roller coaster of emotion right to the end. Your descriptive skills just grew and grew as the story went on. Loved every word. |
Pink Bead Girl chapter 31 . 12/12/2014 What an eloquent phrase, "I'd become a glorified gardener." to describe their childlessness. You know how to make things shine. What a beautiful interlude at the lake. Just blissful. Gosh, Edward in tights. Now there's something you don't see every day. Lol. |
Pink Bead Girl chapter 30 . 12/12/2014 What a lovely moment with Edward at the end there, dancing with his beautiful Bella and finding out he's going to be a daddy. Just lovely. |
Pink Bead Girl chapter 29 . 12/12/2014 Gosh what a roller coaster of happy-as-can-be and total crash and burn wreckage of insecurity and doubt. It's killing me! But in the best possible way of course. Loved the chapter. Go Dr Banner! |
Pink Bead Girl chapter 27 . 12/12/2014 Seems like the good Doctor Banner did his job well after all, despite having a nerdy business card. Perhaps it matches after all, spelunking is all about exploring caves and exploring feelings can be just as hazardous. Gold star for you with coming up with such an interesting term. Loved the last line too, makes one sigh with happiness. |
Pink Bead Girl chapter 26 . 12/12/2014 I am glad that Jake wasn't the bad guy who gave Bella the drugs. The overheard exchange between Alice and Bella was good too, I'm glad Edward got a chance to hear how great Bella thinks he is. Love your story lots. |
Pink Bead Girl chapter 25 . 12/12/2014 Gosh how could Bella be so stupid? I can't believe that after all the pep talking she's done to keep Edward motivated and happy, she resorts to pills herself. I hope that she'll be ok and everything settles. Broke my heart at how devastated Edward was to find that Bella wasn't carrying his child. Such a good chapter. |