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Elsyra chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
I LOVE THIS STORY! But it's so darn depressing, I could bawl! Well, great job with it; I love the emotion in it. I could really picture Alfred pushing Arthur away in a situation like this one, so it fits very well. The only improvement suggestions I would give are nit-picky grammar and spelling, but as this was mostly typed on your phone, it's totally understandable. I imagine that would be difficult to do, but then again, I don't text. :) Great story-hope to see more adorable Hetalia slash from you!

purpleeyednekoyoukai chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
I'm seriously crying right now.

But that's a good thing, cuz it means your writing pulled me in and dragged me along for the ride.

I normally am not a big fan of death!fics, but...I'm making an exception for this one.

Everyone was in character and it just...worked.

Hope you keep writing.

deactiveaccount404 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
I loved this story although It made my cry... But I guess all good writers do that to me!
ilovewafflesx3 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Its so sad! Im on the edge of crying and i just finished it! ITS SO SAD!
xXxanimespazfreakxXx chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
This was great. This was the only fanfictions out of the millions I've read that I literally had tears in my eyes. For that I say congrats, you should get a reward.
sherlawk chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
This is... I don't even know what to say really. I love it so much, but oh god, it made me cry so hard. I just don't know. It is amazing. You are amazing for writing it. I hate you for making me feel so much, but I love you, because this is so beautiful.
MDWOLFGIRL chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
aw like dude i had tears inmy eyes toward the ending, but i like love it :I cant smile though cause americ is dead.
KittyAttack chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Hehe you only left one of my comments in there lol.

Now, since I didn't tell you if I liked the story or not...

This was pretty well written, and I know I would've been sadder if I had watched Hetalia more, but I didn't so I wasn't as 'in-touch' as everyone else. But I DO think it was very good, and it was sad. G'job :)
Neelh-v1 chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
I can't say I cried, but it was very sad. :3