Reviews for Flyaway With Me
team rob chapter 5 . 7/15/2013
:)
just read the outtake and loved it
read these five chapters quickly and hope for an update soon
kyla713 chapter 5 . 6/28/2013
Now I'm all caught up, and looking forward to more again. :) Can't wait, awesome story!
tarebear015 chapter 5 . 5/31/2013
Update!
imagine43ver chapter 5 . 4/6/2013
I love these two and I do trust you. I have a feeling Edward has been suffering because of a decision someone made without his consent. He really wants Bella and that baby. Hope Jacob leaves them alone! I have missed this story...thanks for the update.
texastwifan chapter 5 . 4/3/2013
Wait what? I can't believe that after the way they had been acting over the last few days that Edward stopped. Not only stopped but let Bella leave the room in tears and left her on the couch. I understand the situation between them is not normal but I thought he actually had feelings for her by his actions with her, or was it all an act. Was he put off because she is pregnant with someone elses baby? If so he should have thought about that before. Is he not going to touch her until after she has the baby? Not going to be much of a honeymoon. I can't wait to see how they act with eachother the next day. Update soon...
BellazB chapter 5 . 4/1/2013
Loved this chapter. I liked that Bella was so forgiving to Vanessa :)
Can't wait to read more and see how the relationship between Edward and Bella develops.
Babette12 chapter 5 . 4/1/2013
It seems a little incongruous for this Edward to let this Bella cry herself to sleep without any comfort from him. I've got to wonder what he's thinking. I'm not surprised he pulled back as much as I am that he let her cry like that. While he probably thinks he can't hold her and not continue on, the fact that he stopped at all proves that wrong. (I'm guessing he wants her to love him before they have sex, but I'm still stuck on the lack of comfort thing).

xoxo!
NextChapter chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Thank you for writing this great story. I found it on an author's Favorites list, and i'm so glad I did. The characters are so well written and it's a mature storyline dealing with young love. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
motherbeatrice chapter 5 . 3/31/2013
oh, Bella, maybe he was just afraid he would hurt you...maybe?
love it!
motherbeatrice chapter 4 . 3/31/2013
I should have known that Jake was her boyfriend...ugh...
Bella should warn her as to what kind of guy he really is!
motherbeatrice chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
loving this...
DBrandonCullen chapter 5 . 3/31/2013
Amazing chapter. Please update soon!
puppylove216 chapter 5 . 3/30/2013
Cool story I like this story line I like the twist,it's nice to see a different story please hit the update button.
twilightnaley19 chapter 5 . 3/29/2013
I wonder what's up with Edward. Can't wait to read more
JulesColes3 chapter 5 . 3/29/2013
Wow. He just stopped with no explanation. Please post soon I really can't wait to read how he fixes this issue.
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