Reviews for Open Warehouse
MyMustacheIsMystical chapter 4 . 11/16/2012
I really like this story and I can't wait to read the next chapters. :3
ashley chapter 11 . 10/29/2012
thats soooo stupid sergej wouldnt ask for a child he would kill them on the spot you make sergej sound like some happy father
Ashley chapter 9 . 10/29/2012
ashley chapter 6 . 10/29/2012
"wulfen buddies" what the fuck?
christophe and ash wouldn't play ball together because christophe doesn't like ash
"I'm not. While you were out we kind of just sat there, worried out of our minds. … Just thought that Ash and I needed some fresh air for awhile... he also wouldn't say that
Christophe and I's room... mine and christophes
Guest chapter 5 . 10/29/2012
christophe wouldnt say "Why do wulfen have to ruin it all? christophe also wouldn't go jump off a cliff with them he would say something about it being dangerous and that he doesnt want to get wet and this part...The only ones left to jump were Christophe, Ash, and I. We looked at each other. Christophe was the first to jump, than Ash followed suit. They all kept on yelling at me to jump. If a wolf/dog can do it than so can I, I thought. I took a running start, and jumped off the cliff like my friends did. Little did I know that when I was airborne, they were screaming at me to take cover because the water level was rising and the waves so powerful that they could crush you... is tacky
ashley chapter 4 . 10/29/2012
Dru wouldn't say poor dibsy or ha-ha and ash would stay with her
ashley chapter 3 . 10/29/2012
ummmm Dru is a tough girl she wouldn't scream, she wouldn't sing or dance either so you might want to change this chapter up a bit
XxWhitexKingxX chapter 2 . 10/10/2012
yay finally a good strange angels too.
love to read and read to write chapter 12 . 9/26/2012
awesome, another chapter is a great idea! you should maybe do some like a year after then skip to ten years after for the last chap. this is a great story!you should def carry it on at least.
MyMustacheIsMystical chapter 12 . 8/2/2012
this chapter was so awesome! but it cant have stopped right now :( keep writing you are really good at it. :)
MyMustacheIsMystical chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
i love that song and this chapter yaaaaaay cant wait to read more
Guest chapter 12 . 7/20/2012
That was very amazing i loved it!
P. A. S. A chapter 12 . 7/16/2012
that was so awesome! u shld definitly write a ten yrs later chapter. i really love the idea that Dru and her group retreat from everything and go to the beach. great job! ill def be checking bac in on ur stories.
BurningThoughts chapter 11 . 6/8/2012
Interesting chapter :) good story too! Just an idea to continue the story that Dru could have twins and hide one from seriji?(Sorry if spelt wrong!) Good writing
maddie chapter 12 . 5/24/2012
ten years later yes
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