|Reviews for Every Time We Touch|
| xLittleFoolx chapter 1 . 2/25
Uhhhm that ending (for me) was like what? What the hell just happened? It seemed you had 2 different fics going: one in the beginning about camping & forced cohabitation, the other about camping & the ghosty bit. It didn't work for me. Along with that, too much backstory etc in beginning if you were just gonna stick with the SukiHiro ending. The pacing of Seto/Jou's relationship is a bit hurried, but passable for fanfiction. I liked the beginning half.
| mokuba1330 chapter 1 . 2/9
That was great! I loved the ending. I really thought they might die because the end of the story was so near. (I hate it when people die or commit suicide) I'm just happy it had such a happy ending.
| CuteVampireCollie chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
This was fantastic, in length and quality. There were quite a few grammar mistakes and I don't like that the others were implied as bad, uncaring friends, but other than that, I really liked it. The ending was really sappy, too, but I couldn't help but love it! Also, the ghost story was fantastic! A sequel to this would be really cool. w
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
The ending felt too damn fast! (No offense, just frustrated) (because i wanted Seto and Joey to revealed that the story actually real!)
How they developed their relationship and feeling was amazing! :)
And wow..! Never though the one who solved the friendshipness between Joey and Yugi and the co were Bakura/Ryou...! Awesome!
| Dakota chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing
| Innocent Vash chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
This was so awesome! -squee-
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
I just love this story!1 This is my 6th time reading it! Love everything about it! :D
| kanyon01 chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
AHHHH OH MY FRICKEN GOSH! I AM DYING! I LOVE THIS STORY! ITS SO PERFECT! I JUST ADORE LOVE HATE RELATIONSHIPS! THEYRE SO PERFECT! I LOVE THE STORY AND HOW JOEY AND SETO FINALLY GOT TOGETHER BECUASE OF IT! AHHHHH IT WAS JUST SO PERFECT! PERFECT PLOT, REALISTIC CRUSH, PERFECT STORY, PERFECT LEGEND WITH THE GHOSTS THAT GOT THEM TOGETHER AND SAVED THEM IN THE END! AMAZING WORK! YOU ARE AN AWESOME AUTHOR! XD
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
That was absolutley BRILLIANT I loved the heart wrenching plot turns and the sansation you'd get from reading the words how in depth they showed the characters true feelings. In all ends Make a part two or another storie like this, I thought is was distingushly marvelous. Thank you for making these truly amazing stories, I love reading them nightly and daily. Thank you again. Zombie
| Raymond chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
That story was well written and really well done, I have always thought Joey and Seto had a thing especially in the episodes and seasons, it would be great if someone made this a video, really quite interesting. Watching Yu-Gi-Oh has made me feel a passion and attach fulness with the characters, and this story being unique is quite special. It sucks that the show was made for kids, otherwise they might of "added" in that twist of JoeyxSeto, that would've been a interesting aspect of the show, hatred into love. It was a great story, loved it. Good going you have a talent.
| Drake Dracul chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
this story was great your the only one who wrote kaiba the way he was suppose to be cold hearted bt after a while a little soft hearted it was great enjoyed it
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
LOVE IT! I keep reading this story over and over again! I just love everything about it! :D
| OtEpShAmAyA chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Omg! I was really into this story when it was a multi-chapter fic, and I was SO SAD when you discontinued it! D: I can't believe I missed this! Its been finished for all this time and I never knew! I'm still curious as to what happens after the ending, but I still thought you ended it quite well. :) I could really feel their connection in this story and I just love it so much! If they were to have gotten together in the show, I could picture it happening just like it did in this story. THIS WAS AMAZING AND IT IS DEFINTELY GOING ON MY FAVORTES LIST! :)
| LMINI chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
that might of been the best fanfiction i have ever read