Reviews for Forgive Me, Rin
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22
So great
elixxxrangel chapter 1 . 3/18
as much as I love rinxlen, especially lemon, I really think rin should have kicked len for trying to "make it up to her" lol I mean she was almost raped and he was all "this is your fault, here lemme make it better...with my penis" hahaha just saying. but nice story. lemons, yesh xD
Web2theweb1 chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Romantic! Love it lol
H.I.D.L.I.A.R chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Aah, Teto. You sneaky little bastard.
Mimi chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Wonderful. Simply wonderful.
Reviewer chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Lel, dat Teto, She grinned at the end. Tetooooo, what were you doing? Huehuehue.
Nina chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
Rin: "shit... Ohhhhhh my god, Len... What the hell was that?"

Me: XD HAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Ohhhhhhh my god?

Well played sir/ma'am
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
TETO!
Orenjiyukihime chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
This is a nice story! _
I Know I'm A Dreamer chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
. . . D
. . . XD
*Hatsune Miku - Strawberry (full ver.) - VOCALOID*
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
My God, Teto is a HUGE pervert.
Len Yuki chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Ooh...Nicely done, Teto, well-planned...Yet...I totally saw that coming. GREAT story, amazing, sooo good, I love this story, I hope Len does kill Akaito, with Teto's help.
My favorite line: An angry Teto is a very frightening Teto.
XD Anyway, gonna read more of your (vocaloid) stuff :D
*Only writes about vocaloid stuffs* ...
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Could Len be more BRUTAL!?
Clavemien Nigram Rosa chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
"That's it, I'm sleeping with Teto." Lol I loved that line.

nice story
devious-heartless chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
This story was enjoyable. Very...stimulating...?

felt the plot was kinda rushed though. This is ok as a one shot but i think it'd be better if this was made into a chapter story.
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