Reviews for Needless: Simeon Resurrection
MaiBilaro chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
please continue i want cruz to be evil
cooljames8836 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
I think you should continue who needs 50
Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Yes countinue the story
TheSealer chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
The story is going good. But there are some points that you missed. First, Blade and Eve began to respect Cruz and Blade stoped calling him Yamada (though Eve still cna't remeber his real name)

Then there's the lack of bad guys planning in a secret hide out scene. In fact, these new Needlesses could have certain diferent powers from the normal Needlesses (like they can all regenerate at will or are mildly immortal to wounds), to give the idea that soemthing big is happening.

Besides going to Disk shouldn't be their first option. First they should try to figure things out by themselves. But that's just my review. You're the author, anyway.
OriginalElementa chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Yo! Ur story is good gramatically and personification on the characters but i think that u need more subtle hints on what is to happen, i need more foreshadowing and mayb a red herring! Keep it up!
kevach chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Good job. continue the story