|Reviews for Unplanned Consequences|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2017
I love this. I spent last night and this morning reading it. Now I have to read the sequel.
| treen189910 chapter 21 . 7/9/2017
this was a a VERY good chapter. which chapter did Zelda tell Links she was pregnant?
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2017
this story is fucking messed up
| Anonymous chapter 34 . 3/11/2017
When is the next one?
| Anonymous chapter 5 . 3/11/2017
Lovely and suspenseful
| JaninnaMaynz chapter 34 . 3/6/2017
I noticed a large amount of minor spelling mistakes as I went through the story. One of the most notable, personally, being doge instead of dodge. Over and over. I just thought you should know... ;)
| JaninnaMaynz chapter 18 . 3/1/2017
I love this story. I've never played SS. I've only played 3DS titles. My 3DS was my first real gaming system. It's still my only one. I got it the year it came out. I've played OoT3D, ST, Four Swords Anniversary Edition, and I'm working on MM3D for the first time. I've beaten the others already. Also, I looked up the pinky promise thing, and I kept getting something about shrimp. I clicked to see alternate translations, and then got a pinky promise-related result. What I actually got:
You are lying
I will make you feel sorry
Now promise of the little finger performed.
(That's changing only the last part. From the shrimp thing.)
The only other change that makes sense is changing the first one to: If I get your lie
So yeah... anywho... I'll shut up now...
| Guest chapter 26 . 7/29/2016
yes I am cying
| Guest chapter 33 . 3/25/2016
Make a new sires for the part 2 plz and yes I'm a kid so deal with it
| Guest chapter 34 . 3/14/2016
So happy story but the beginning it was a very crazy twist
| Link chapter 7 . 2/13/2016
LOL! Exactly how the game goes!
| Link chapter 5 . 2/13/2016
"Oh crap..." she thought. "I AM pregnant!" "This is SO weird!"
The next day she woke up early, but was extremely tired.
She didn't bother to fall back asleep.
But then she began to think things again...
"Hmmmm... she thought with a curious/horrified look on her face, "What if GROOSE was the father?!" "No, no, no in couldn't be, for many reasons... nor even any of his really dumb goons. Well, I actually hope its Link. After all, he IS my boyfriend right?" she was sure now and was ready to finally step out of the room and tell Link. Not very risky by knowing Link's reaction; a little surprised at first, but eventually go, 'Meh' and stroll along with it...
Zelda knocks on Link's door.
Link opens and says, "Hey BabyGirl, what's up?" Zelda goes, "Well, it's sort of complicated..." she replies. "Well," says Link "Go on..." "Hey uh... it's a bit of a secret o.k.?" "So you can't really, uh, TELL anyone, o.k.?" "Yeah, I'm listening."
Zelda sighs I thinks, "OK, this is it! Here I go..."
Zelda stutters a little...
Then without thinking she just said, "HOLY CRAP LINK I'M... PREGNANT!" but not exactly too loud though.
Then Link faints.
And exactly how Zelda planned it Link slipped by the shocking part and carried on!
But, however... Zelda's father was like the same way Link was...
As Zelda's stomach grew, everyone began to notice. Some thought Link and Zelda legally and secretly got married. Others thought it was just that sort of common thing that happens when, you know... TEENAGERS am I right?
Her mother was like REALLY disappointed for 6 months. And why Zelda's father didn't care is because he was actually READY for grandkids.
Eventually Zelda got to the point where she was about to hit labor, like, any SECOND pretty much.
5 minutes later Zelda screamed in pain as Link used his strength to carry her to the medical center (of the school)!
A little boy was born about a day later. 1 day late, 8 pounded healthy baby. 'WOW.' Everybody thought. This was weird... but now, Zelda was a mother, and Link was a father. Luckily they got to keep young Aerge. The smartest kid you could ask for (unlucky for Link though because the tot wasn't exactly into adventure and sword combat...)!
Then just 3 years later Link and Zelda got married and later produced 6 more kids in 15 years.
"What A Life"
| Solidchief Link chapter 10 . 11/28/2015
Wouldn't have already grown a set to make Zelda pregnant? Hmm?
| anonymous rs chapter 33 . 9/3/2015
I have two words for you... Awesome Story!
| anonymous rs chapter 14 . 9/3/2015
Well well well, cliffhanger endings to a chapter! Lol