Reviews for Sunset
DobbyLovesSocks chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Aww so sweet! Very well done for something so short!
felines chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Spelling and Grammar: 5/5. Good on that front!

Originality: 7/10. I like the dictionary entry at the beginning, which really reined me in. The sunset date idea is really overused though.

Believability: 10/10. It's really believable! Scorpius setting up the date was really sweet!

Flow: 7/10. The spacing out of the dictionary entry really bugs me, I'm afraid. There doesn't seem to be any idea of sections, which would really help. Also, a few phrases were awkward, and the overuse of "very" puts me off. Otherwise, this was good!

Overall story: 12/15. I enjoyed the fluff! Just watch some of the things I pointed out for the other categories.

Total: 41/50, or 82%! Good job!
InLoveWithFred chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Awwww, Rosie and Scorpy are in love! I Love it! I suppose Ron has accepted this by now? They are such a good couple, almost as good as me and Fred… ha, they don't have eight kids to they?
lalala chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
no offense but it was kinda boring... :(