|Reviews for Tuba Butt|
| Signor Sam chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
"That didn't help at all" this part reminds me of that story Patrick shared about the ugly barnacle!
| Dragon MoonX chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
This is hilarious. I now have the mental image of Meloetta lying on the grass, her butt in the air, farting as everyone points and laughs. And the "diet vanilla" line was very funny as well.
| Farla chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
[Meloetta (in her normal, aria form) ]
You shouldn't need parenthesis there. Just describe her.
[Two Bellossom ]
You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it's a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you're thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.
["Heh! Your butt sure is musical." Genesect joked as he kept chuckling, "They should call you Tuba Butt." ]
Dialogue is written as "Hello," he said or "Hello!" he said, never "Hello." He said or "Hello." he said or "Hello," He said or "Hello" he said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn't contain a speech verb, in which case it's written as "Hello." He grinned, never "Hello," he grinned or "Hello," He grinned or "Hello." he grinned. Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you're breaking up two complete sentences it's "Hi," he said. "This is it." not "Hi," he said, "this is it." or "Hi," he said "this is it." And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's "Hi. This," he said, "is it." If there's no speech verb in the break, you use a dash, like "Hi. This - " He looked around. "- is it." And the same punctuation and capitalization applies to thoughts.
[Your farting your fat out!" ]
Your" is possessive, as in, your story, "you're" means "you are".
| Yoshizilla-Fan chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
So funny! XD This puts a new twist on Meloetta's Farting Problem! XD Perhaps we should start calling her Tuba butt after all! XD