Reviews for Odd Man Out
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2015
Please write more Leo centric stories!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
Pretty good. But I think it would have been better longer, no offence.
Lady Aoi-chan chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
AAAWWWWWW! My poor baby! I love this. It's simple, but it looks deeply into his emotions (even though there's actually more dept to Leo's sadness. T-T)
Smiley101 chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww Leoooooooo my baby my boyfriend! I'm trying to find ways to prove that seven is not all bad...its a prime number, and prime means first because Leo is number one! Idk what I'm talking about I am sleepy therefore random and that's all I got. Well good writing
WildChild13 chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
ObsessedwReading chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
Great fanfiction.
chaotrope chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
More pweese love you you should do somyhing on loes mom
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
me chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
here is a review! it was a very nice oneshot. im kinda depressed about how leo is forever alone though...
thisaccounthasbeenclosedforeve chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
I love this...
writergirl97 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Wow. I love this. And does it sound cheesy if I say to him, we can be the odd ones out... together? ;P
CrazyLittleGermanMiss chapter 1 . 3/16/2012



this made me feel so sad.

I loved it in a bad way.

it was awful.

but amazing.

great writing.

sad story.

almost made me cry.

Leo's a deeper character then so many people make him out to be.

you did him justice.

and I thank you for that.
kiwihead136 chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
I read this a long time ago and didn't review, sorry!

But I was thinking the same thing, Leo's the odd one out, and I love how you wrote it.

(Although personally, I'm all for LeoxReyna, but that's just me...)
zealousfreak27 chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
That was really sad. Really, really sad. I lovve Leo too much for this. I ain't just a fangirl, I just think that Leo's the most developed character.
Unironicdokis chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Leo don't be sad! U always hav me:D! I 3 Leo I feel so bad he's not paired off but idk maybe that's the point, maybe he's supposed to be independent but I still think he should hav some1 he's practically the ONLY new character I really like as much as the originals:

-Leo: kicks ass, is funny & I love how he's not conventionally "handsome"

-Jason: has got to be one of the BLANDEST characters I have EVER read. So boring. No personality

-Piper: she is an annoying little bitch that I just want to stab with a fork. Cuz she's such a faux action girl. I mean, she acts likes she's above the other Aphrodite girls, then fawns over freaking Jason the entire time. I'm sorry sweetie, just because to don't like make-up doesn't mean ur hardcore.

-Frank: I like him, I just don't LOVE him liked I loved nearly all the old characters. I like him cuz he's Asian (XD), & he's kinda awkward. He's not a conventional hero nor conventionally good looking (kinda like Leo, but Leo is better cuz he's like the 3rd Stoll both of whom I adore)

-Hazel: she's alright. Kinda irritating, but a MILLION times better than piper. & her angst seems genuine, I mean a girl who caused her mother's death & the rise of a... Giant? Or a girl who angsts about her boyfriend, which angst seems reasonable?

-Octavian: this guy as a rival will nvr beat Clarisse. Clarisse is to awesome to be trumped by this loser as the "rival". Annoying as hell, plus he kills stuffed animals.

-Reyna: I barely know anything about her, & I already hate her. I mean she's cockblocking EVERYONE! This bitch has taken an interest in Percy; therefore, she is a percabeth cockblocker! NO ONE I REPEAT NO ONE COCKBLOCKS PERCABETH! (plot device Rachel dare cockblocked them enough, now we get this chickDX!) & on top of that she's cockblocking Jasper. Which I really don't give a crap about but I REALLY don't want to hear piper bitch & moan for another book just cuz Jason is hooked in a love triangle. (speaking of love triangles, this Leo/Hazel/Frank stuff is bullshit, cuz if riordon puts freakin LEO in a love triangle I will strangle him. In my opinion Leo should be with Drew - I know wierd but intriguing in an odd way - , Thalia, or Reyna (to stop all her effin' cockblocking))...

-Oh & Drew? Riordon, y u hating on AsiansDx (joking but still)? She's not as impressive a rival as clarisse was but if riordon gave her some decent development like he did with clarisse I would like her a lot more now...

So yeah, enjoy my rantXD... I liked ur story. Poor Leo...
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