Reviews for Hidden Family
Elenhin chapter 1 . 1/14/2012

Looki, me reading. :D So far no Harry Potter and so fatr so good, poor Ginger, he ain't having much luck with the girls... ;)

NoturHeroNeMore chapter 4 . 1/13/2012
Great chapter! I hope that this is a lightHarry that does not fall for Dumbles traps and manipulations. After his years with trustworthy adults, he should realize its not his job to go on adventures and actually value his own life. Dumbles reactions would be priceless. Keep up the good work.
yellow 14 chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
I'm sorry, I am unable to continue reading this story. You really need to think about the nature of the characters you're working with. This isn't the Dumbles we know from the books, there is no way that Harry would have been raised by the Dursley's had Dumbles known of this connection. I am sorry, but I regard character-bashing as showing a lack of skill. Might I reccomend that you try avoiding it in future.
yellow 14 chapter 2 . 1/8/2012
I doubt Dumbles would have left Harry with Petunia if he knew he had another option. An interesting crossover idea
darkroseofwolf chapter 3 . 1/7/2012
like it keep up the good work
davela chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Hi Vinsmouse,

Interesting start to this fic. I'll look forward to reading more.
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