|Reviews for Tangled for a Flower|
| Antha1 chapter 65 . 10/15
I have no idea what's going on or why. I don't know how Rapunzel could defend or trust the people who kidnapped her and handed her over to an evil psychopath. So they decided she had enough and let her go, now all is forgiven? In what universe does that work?
And why refer to Jacob's power as hypnotism when it's obviously magic? Because you can't hypnotize someone without their cooperation, and you can't make them do something they wouldn't ordinarily do. This has to be some kind of magic.
Also I don't know the relationship between Rapunzel, Azalea, and the sun flowers. At first I thought that Azalea had used the song to duplicate Rapunzel's voice and appearance but she sang after that without duplicating anyone. Why did they dig up the flowers only to plant them again? I'm so confused.
| Antha1 chapter 38 . 10/13
Just so you know, hanging by your arms is not a survivable position. It isn't a quick or pleasant way to die. The Romans called it crucifixion. I suppose Jacob didn't know (or maybe he did).
| Antha1 chapter 25 . 10/13
I need to call time out. There is a lot going on here, and it isn't making much sense.
1) How is it that the guy who was caught in the act of kidnapping Rapunzel is the wrong guy? When did the wrong guy have a chance to switch places with him?
2) Why does Eugene leave Rapunzel in a room with more than one door with a person who looks just like her? And then he doesn't notice that the 'Rapunzel' that comes out is wearing the other girls' dress? He's not even curious about that?
3) How can two people who aren't related look so much alike that no one can tell the difference?
4) When Rapunzel is kidnapped for the fourth time, (once by Gothel, then by Fernando, then by 'the wrong guy', and then by 'Dwayne'), how is it that no one notices one of the kingdom's most-wanted fugitives carrying her unconscious body out of the castle? How did he get into the castle in the first place?
I hope you can answer some of these questions.
| Arya chapter 1 . 9/2
This was really good. I enjoyed the read, and the imagery was nice.
| pleased-to-write chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Hi there! You are a fantastic writer and all, but I guess I wanna say the same! I love your story for it's content and for the way you portray the characters so accurately, but also for sentimental values. I'm new to the site and only recently finished my first fanfiction (Frozen). I always come back for Tangled stories because I've always had a deep connection with the movie! Not to mention, that this was the first fanfiction I ever read, and then I stopped going on here (this was before I had an account)! Now, I found it again out of pure coincidence and I am so happy! I've just started a new story (Tangled) and I know that this might be something annoying to ask, but are there any tips you have on how to create this characters so accurately, like you did? I think I have the hang of it, but I just hate it when people portray them the way THEY want them to be instead of how they really are! I'm so sorry for the long review, but thank you for writing this story I can't wait to start re-reading this! :)
| ImmaHooligan chapter 72 . 7/3/2014
I noticed that what Nathan was saying was going along with the song When I Was Your Man by Bruno Mars! When he said "I should have bought her flowers." "At least we held hands." "She loved to dance." and finally "She has another man now."! I love that song and Bruno Mars!
| ImmaHooligan chapter 62 . 6/21/2014
I LOVE THIS STORY!
| Guest chapter 39 . 8/6/2013
Awsome your story is really cool no its amazing must read more
| Insert-Random-Snarky-Pun-Here chapter 99 . 7/29/2013
This is an amazing story but I cant finish it because my sister kicked me off the computer so this is just tofav
| TheRealMerlin chapter 21 . 7/29/2013
| TheRealMerlin chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Lol rapunzel's concern is hilarious!
| Rosemary chapter 120 . 7/10/2013
I have already started reading "Caught in a Dream" and just wanted to take a moment to thank you, for this brilliantly wonderful story you have posted for us to enjoy. With so many plot twists, and emotional connections, this is no doubt the best tangled fanfiction in the history of like... EVER. I really appreciate this work of art, and all of the positive responses to all your reviewers comments. :) You are a brilliantly gifted writer, and I hope that one day you consider actually becoming a real author. I would for sure read any story you write without a second thought, and I'm sure I would enjoy every minute of it. So I guess the last thing I'm going to say is, Thank you. Thank you for these wonderful characters. Thank you for your common updating. And most of all thank you for tangling me into this fantastic story, Tangled for a flower.
| KirstynHerondale chapter 119 . 7/8/2013
Ooohh my God. No words.
| KirstynHerondale chapter 118 . 7/8/2013
NooOOo I'm crying so hard right now
| KirstynHerondale chapter 117 . 7/8/2013
Holy shit! Omg no there CAN NOT be only three chapters left!