Reviews for Practice to Deceive
oh werd chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
Lubs you back chickabee. Sorry I dropped the ball this afternoon. I trust you shipped me that noose like I asked you to? I'll be looking for it.
evilnat chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
Oh wow, Edward is so sure that Bella is Jake's girlfriend. i dont think she is. It looks like there is something there but it could also be only one-sided on Jake's side.

great chapter, he's really quite malicious especially thinking she's cheating on her boyfriend. Its scary what revenge can do to people!

csuter chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
Yikes! I fucking hate him and yet here I sit, still reading!
Mari94 chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
Wow, just saw your story tonight and I am hooked! Can't wait for more!
i.luv.twilight2 chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
Edward's journal entries were certainly enough to leave Bella devastated in the prologue. Good story!
masenobsessed chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
Well, you gotta give him credit, he's smooth. And sexy. The comeback with the ho about calling her Bella was very clever as was the pizza. It's a shame he's let one girl sour him on them all. I'm really looking forward to when he realizes Bella is different. Call me weird, but for some reason I like it when Edward is mean to Bella. I guess cause I like to see him beg in the end ;P And I really like how you put his journal entries at the end. It let's us know ahead of time what Bella is going to be reading and that makes it that much sadder while reading this. Thanks!
Kgunter34 chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
There are pretty little pills and padded rooms for those who suffer from delusions. Maybe a step ladder to get out of the hole he is digging himself into. Great chapter.
weedstert chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
Edward has made up his mind...made assumptions and I get sad thinking back to the prologue...I'm enjoying this story a lot...thanks :)
PAWsPeaches chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
oh man, from the start of this chapter to the end, i kept thinking of cruel intentions. thats one of my favorite movies still, and i thought about ryan phillipe's fine ass way more than rob's while reading this LOLOL.

I love love love it livie! I could see towards the end where his guard is already coming down and its awesome. he is also so damn resentful to women due to maggie. i cant wait to see where this goes. well, i mean, i know where it will go eventually but... you know what i mean. i need more. now. .
Maplestyle chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
I'm trying to decide if Edward is right about Bella or not. For all we know Jake is just the best friend, like from the books and he wants more but she doesn't. But from what Jane said it does kind of make her look bad. Either way what Edward is knowingly doing is wrong and my heart is going to break into about a million fucking pieces when it all falls apart :( But I big fat puffy heart you BB cause you can bring the angst as hard as you can bring the laughs!
Courtney37 chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
Oh Edward! I really can't say much more bc he's a bit of a dick right now but I love where this is going. Thanks again. Bye for now.
Xxdazzled by twilightxX chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
Hey you! You seriously made me very happy today with 2 updates from both your stories..squeal-worthy happy ;) So I really am wondering what's the deal with Bella and Jacob? Guess I'll just have to wait and see. And I like the fact that Bella actually kept Edward interested for a month and didn't give in easily. Kudos to her :P
RoseArcadia chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
I love this too much not to pimp!
ecullen'sgirl chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
Edward is so sleezy...
cejsmom chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
I'm happy that you aren't dragging it out. Their "relationship" is going to start soon. I wonder if or when she will ever explain her relationship to Edward re Jake. Loved the update!
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