Reviews for Daniel Ocean's Daughter
Guest chapter 14 . 1/2/2017
YOU'RE never at home on a Saturday night.

It's a contraction between "you" and "are" so you need an apostrophe. Please please google contractions. It's absolutely vital for you to understand contractions so that you can sound like an educated person.
Guest chapter 12 . 1/2/2017
They have earthquakes in vegas all the time...
Guest chapter 9 . 1/2/2017
Matt with two "t's"

Matt is a name. A mat is something you wipe your feet on.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/2/2017
we're coming.

it's a contraction between we and are so you need the apostrophe.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/2/2017
Teen beat cover boys. Not tiger beat.

That's one of the most classic lines of the entire movie and you ruined it.
marina2351 chapter 38 . 11/2/2014
Ahhhhhh! This was so amazing! Can't wait for the sequel! Your writing is brilliant xx
Spitfire303 chapter 36 . 8/5/2014
looking forward to it :-)
Guest chapter 16 . 8/4/2014
*We're in Barney
Guest chapter 13 . 8/3/2014
I feel like Tess would call her boyfriend by his first name, not his last name.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/3/2014
*I could have done without that one
*Turk and Abby's version
*we're not the worst people you could fly with
*I just like newbies
*Yep we're here
*An hour or two
"Chorus's" - *A chorus
*We're meant for each other
*after he kissed my hand
*you're too serious sometimes
Guest chapter 7 . 8/3/2014
*Las Vegas
*We're coming
Guest chapter 24 . 8/3/2014
"Don't admit you didn't love it" - *Don't deny you loved it OR *Admit you loved it
Guest chapter 2 . 8/3/2014
*I like to think that I am
*Teen beat cover boys
*When that perfect hand comes along
Guest chapter 2 . 8/3/2014
It's Vegas. Of course the target is a casino.
Dogsled racer15 chapter 36 . 7/1/2014
Love your story so much!
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