|Reviews for Flight|
| ShadeLivesForever chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
This is quite a short prologue but the idea is interesting. I would like to see this story complete ;)
On the other hand, numbers in stories should be written in words, unless you are talking about years. Also, watch out for grammar mistakes in the second paragraph, especially of your use of the comma. This advice is nitpicking though.