|Reviews for The Dark and Light|
| 4000kills chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
GAAAAH HOW COME I DIDNT GET THIS. D: oh well. i shall put on alert asasp ;D
whoaaa tideborn and wraiths! i like ur idea :DD very different, which is really nice for a change.
YAY IM A PRINCESS. AND A QUEEN. woohoooo XD a very big change from the real, lowly little psychic in the game loool. i like it :P
plus i like the half-race idea. really cool(:
write faster D:
| crazililwabbit chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Thanks for taking the time to read and review my story! Thought I'd return the favor! I have to be honest, I have no idea what this is from... lol. But I did enjoy it! I will keep reading and I am sure I will learn what it's about more as I go!
One tip - Maybe work on dicribing the surroundings a bit more... like what they're wearing, or where they are. I have trouble with that too. It takes practice. I always end up going back over my stories and adding a lot of that in. :)