|Reviews for Captive|
| Theia Pallas chapter 1 . 1/23
too cute. harry is the perfect sub
i love the way harry missed kissing the liver at the end -
| Algor Nox chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
"missing it when his liver pulled back"
NOOOO! What will happen to his Friday nights!?
| junsui-nozomi chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Do you have this story on another site?
| Nightscurse chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
This was interesting :3 I loved the ending lol
| lynn973 chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
i liked it but the words were hard to read
| FatesMistake chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
I've written a Sev/Tom before, they rarely work out. There's just not an ending for them, because there's too much that needs to be covered. The best that can be done is to leave off with questions unanswered, so you dodged a bullet. Really, the amount of people involved with a Sev/Tom is...palpable. Harry and Sev only have to deal with Ron, 'Mione, Albus, and Tom, but Tom and Sev have to deal with the most important Death Eaters and *everyone* in the Order, not to mention a ton of confusing conversations just for them (unless you're dealing with a Sevservant fic, but those are so cliche).
| puffin chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
I liked this story but there were some spelling errors. You might want to go back and fix them. Other then that it was a g
| felicia2235 chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
I liked it. There were a few errors and the writting was really close together and made it kind of hard to read but other than that good job.