|Reviews for Funny gal|
| auroranova chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Provoking set-up, but watch your grammar and punctuation, and be sure to spell-check. I'm curious to know where you'll go with this. The shoe-box full of "momentos" are kind of a dead give-away. You might want to make that less obvious, at least at first. All-in-all, not too bad. You've got the characterizations of Sam and Al down pretty well. Make your scene switches a bit more obvious, such as putting a dotted line between them, or extra space. It was a bit jarring to go from one part of the story to the next with no warning. Keep up the good work. You've got something here, now run with it.
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
| Shelby chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
When are you going to write more? I like this story.