|Reviews for Every Time|
| ii-Phoenix-ii chapter 1 . 2/28
Oh Sherlock, you jackass...
I could practically feel poor Molly's uncomfortableness. Even more than when I watched the episode!
I don't know why I laughed at the last line. Weird.
I have to agree with you, I think this was a humbling moment for Sherlock. He actually properly apologized. He ACTUALLY said 'sorry' and 'forgive me.' That's huge for him.
| TheGoldenCrown chapter 1 . 2/23
*dies* Molly, it wasn't pity. He was trying to fix it! Molly, can't you see, oh Molly!
| Ghostly Green chapter 1 . 2/7
Beautiful, fantastic job with this story - despite knowing how the party would end, I still held onto hope for Molly and was just as devastated as I was when watching the show. You wrote her beautifully, kept her perfectly in-character and I loved it. Thanks for writing!
| Snim chapter 1 . 1/25
The feels. The feels. The amount of feels is not okay. But, otherwise, really good fanfic.
| iolahardy1 chapter 1 . 1/17
This is the worst thing Sherlock has done in all the three seasons combined. It is one thing to not love Molly, but to insult her so blatantly was just cruel...even for him. But after season 3 I am forced to think that maybe it is just his jealously which makes him react that way? He is jealous of that red packet in her bag & is wondering who its meant for. Maybe that is his way of trying to know if she means it for a special someone? I am glad Molly doesnt just dissolve into tears & says something to make him feel ashamed of his behaviour.
| CreativeReading chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Loved that scene and your take on Molly's feelings.
| jackiemack916 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
This just hurt to read. Reliving that horrible moment from her perspective. Well done.
| Poodle warriors chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
This scene hurt my heart; I cringed for Molly. The story really put all her feelings out there- I felt like I was right there with her.
| Felix02 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Oh. That was a ride. I was actually with Molly through her Christmas shopping high and her hopes, and went right down with her during her emotional hurt. Beautiful piece. You did Molly justice here.
| Grace chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
The minute I read the part where she thinks to herself that she hopes he likes her dress... I winced. Again, your drabble is flawless.
| OnginalMaz chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
This was so painful. Absolutely gorgeous but just so painful. You captured the emotions brilliantly.
| yay chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Poor Molly. She's right though - he isn't nearly as smart as he thinks he is.
| noukinav018 chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Yah, I remember when I was watching the episode. I was like "man are you really this dense"?
Greg and John were very aware of the fact of why Molly was there like that in the first place. That's why they were so shocked. The others could see what Sherlock failed to notice...
| KazeCat chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
This scene is hard to watch even the third time - not at all funny as it's probably supposed to, just hard. The only good thing about it is Sherlock's reaction to it - actual shock. Somehow only God knows he didn't see that coming (even I did right as he started talking), and he reacted almost sensitive, guilty, and all human. At least _that_ is something for Molly to be proud of, in a way.
This fic is interesting because you just KNOW everything happened like this. Poor girl.
I think Molly is the saddest comic relief character in TV history.
| LOTRlover chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Oh gosh-just loved this. You are a brilliant writer, and this was perfectly portrayed. It was like your revealed the scene to its deepest potential! I don't have words for how much I love this!