|Reviews for Every Time|
| enomix chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Wow, I loved this scene from Sunday and you've written it very well. Molly is perfect and so is the whole plot leading up to the scene. Great story. Really enjoyed it.
| Cardboard Tube Knight chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
This is really, really well written. Oddly I thought about doing the same thing the other day but I'm just no good at the sort of thing. I like Molly's voice and I really think it takes a woman to write something this honest about another woman's feelings because while we might understand to read it, men just don't get it like this.
| alasweneverdo chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
So beautiful. I love Molly and always feel really bad for her, you know? As much as I love Sherlock, he's such a dick to her all the time.
| broadwayb chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
poor Molly - and Sherlock is an idiot! It never struck me to think the Sherlock didn't know that he was the object of Molly's obsession, but it makes sense now. As always - beautifully done and I hope to read Sherlock's pov in the near future.
| Reader chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
I loved this. Your way of explaining Molly makes me realize why I like her so much, because I have felt in her position. I have felt this exact way about someone who was good at everything, but totally unkind to me; getting that person's approval was so much more important because of that.
Poor Molly. But good for her for not being completely blind about the negativeness of her infatuation.
| reasonable-butterfly chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
that was just about perfect. The scene itself almost made me cry, but all the back story you provided positively broke my heart. Now I'm sure it couldn't have been any other way. Bravo. And extra pint of curses to Sherlock's arrogance and Irene's ill-timed messages.
| icansoar chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Poor Molly. This was a very perfect characterization of her!
| Mizuki1988 chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Oh, this is so lovely and heartbreaking... poor, poor Molly, I love her a thousand times more than I did before after this episode...
| Chalcedony Rivers chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Ugh, that was almost as painful as the scene. I think you captured the character of Molly perfectly here - even small things like the fact that she buys "smellies" for her Mum that just make her seem a little bit more real. And then that ending just broke my heart.
| Miggs chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Oh Molls...my heart breaks for her!
| Panserik chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
This is so beautifully written, and as a Sherlolly shipper I wholeheartedly approve. Last night's episode left my hyper and I love the Christmas. And Molly's my third favourite character after the terrible twosome. I also have Irene rage...
Thanks for this sweet, sad story that does a great job of portaying how pathetic Molly feels.
| SlaughterOtter chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Best characterization of Molly I've read yet. Fantastic job.